文中共有10处语言错误。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(﹨)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1）. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2）. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Dear Sally，

    Now I'd like to tell you something about my part-time job this summer vacation, of which I worked like a guide in a travel agency. The work was interesting but tired. I think it was helpful to work this holiday. It was the first time that I have earned money on my own. I've come to understand how hard my parents work to support for the family. I used to keep on ask them for money, but now I'll never waste money and learn to share worry to my parents. I've learnt how to get along well with others. What's worse, I've gained some working and social experience and I have learnt something can't be learnt from textbooks. All these will be good for my future. In the word, I had a wonderful and valuable summer vacation.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（/划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线（{#blank#}1{#/blank#}），并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    Dear Jeremy and Alice,

    Although we've been delighted to have you as neighbors, we're hoping to settle something that bothers to us. In a word, your dog—Cleo.

    We've called several time about Cleo's early morning barking. It is difficult to understanding why she barks every minute she's outside. The early morning barking have been disturbing us as we are often up all night with the baby. Beside, Cleo tends to bark a average of six hours a day. This morning she starts barking even before 5 o'clock. That is too much for us, considering how closely the houses are.

    We appreciate our apologies and goodwill, but we hope that you can figure a good way of settling the matter.

    Sincerely,

    Jack and Rose

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下画—横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    Today is Mother's Day. I love mother so much that I've done many things for him. In the morning I buy some flowers with my pocket money and put them in a vase. In the afternoon, I went to buy some vegetable and cooked simple but delicious dinner for my family. After the meal, I gave mother a card what I made myself and said “Happy Mother's Day” to her. Then I told her to pay more attention on her health and not overwork. I also promised to help her to do some housework from today on. Heard the words, mother was moved to tears.

    Today is a specially day, warm but meaningful.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出修改后的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误仅限1词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分

    I went on a trip to Thailand during the winter holiday, that was wonderful because I tried something I have never experienced before. One morning when we were walking along the beach, enjoyed sunshine, someone strongly advised that we went water skiing. However, we didn't dare to face the challenge because that seemed dangerous to do it. My friends all encouraged me, so I finally joined in them. At last, I couldn't stop screaming in fright. Later I felt that it was an amazement filling with fun. From an experience I learned that we should be brave enough to try something new. Only in this way we find a better self to meet any challenge.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：⒈ 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

⒉ 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear Mr. Black,

    I'm very thank to you for inviting me to stay with you in the come summer vacation. I have been dreamed of seeing you again so that I can get help from you in my English learning. And I'm afraid I cannot go to your place in this summer. I've promised my grandmother, she lives in the country, to spend this summer with her. She misses me too much that I find difficult to refuse her request. I'm busy preparing for my examinations in present. I planned to visit you in winter if it's convenient to you.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词；

删除：把多余的词用斜线（/）划掉；

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：⒈每处错误及修改均仅限一词；

⒉只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    Yesterday evening I went to the supermarket. When I was about to enter I see an old lady of deformed(畸形的) hands calling me. At the first, I got afraid but then I decided to go ahead and find out that she wanted. She asked me for some money. She said I hadn't eaten anything since that morning. I gave her some money and she happy went to a food stand and had her food. It made me realize we went shopping without think twice then forget all about it in a few day. However, there are people don't even have money to get a meal. I hope to spreading kindness to those in need in any way possible.