增加：在缺词处加一个漏子符号（∧）并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1  每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear Jack,

    How is everything going recently? I'm writing to tell you something more about my birthday. The other day we hold aparty to celebrate my 18th birthday. I received many presents from my friends and parents, including cards, books, CDs or so on. During the party we sang and danced, having good time. I thanked my friends for his help and company. At the meantime, I showed my sincere appreciation to my parents for bringing me up. Now I grow up, that means I should shoulder more responsibilities. I'll try my best to share more houseworks to reduce their burden. It's high time that I dosomething to repay them.

    How did you celebrate your 18th birthday? I'm looking forward to hear from you soon.

                                                                                                                                                                                 Yours Sincerely

                                                                                                                                                                                        Li Jin

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增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1). 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2). 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    It's not the people you came across in your daily life who will stand by you in time of a need. It's your family who will but it's important to know that. It happens such often that we end up take our parents for granted. We hurt them many cases and they are treated with disrespect for not understanding them. It's necessary to understand the fact that there is always different in opinions across two generations. But what really matters is the unconditionally love and care that they hold for us, that I believe is truly valuable.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear Tom,

    I'd like to tell you something that took the place in my school yesterday.In the afternoon we hold a ceremony for our coming 18-year-old birthday.At first we made an oath that like grown-ups we should have sense of duty for our society from now on.Then we showed our thanks to their parents who had gone through hardships to bring us down and teachers who have been educating us patiently.And our teachers also gave us cards expressed their good wishes to us.Finally,we put on wonderfully performances,singing or dancing.We learned a lot after the activity.

Yours,

Li Hua

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    One day, some children were playing hide-and-seek while they heard a boy names Tate shouting. "Help! The golden lion is coming after me!" They go running to help Tate, only find him laughing on the ground. One child said, "You shouldn't do that. If you are real in trouble, nobody will come to help you."

    In a rainy day, Tate shouted again, "The river is flooding and I can't swim. Help!" The children didn't believe her this time. But a girl saw everything and called the others to save him. Tate was not sorry for playing tricks on his friend. So from that day on, Tate never did that again.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    Zhang Hua is a kind-hearted boy, who is always willing to helping others. Every morning he takes out of rubbish for an old neighbour who lived alone. Sometimes he takes a walk with her and tells her interested stories. Whenever he meets with someone in troubles, he will lend a helping hand. As result, he is high thought of in his neighborhood. Some classmates misunderstand him, saying he is a fool. Some even think she expects something in return. But he doesn't care if they like him. In his opinion, helping others can not only bring him happiness and also make him grateful for that he has.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词；

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉；

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意1．每处错误及修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

    I really wanted to cook when I was four. My dad, however, thinks I was too young to learn cooking. For many years, he only allowed me observe him cook. All I did was watch him in the kitchen. Sometimes, he would not let me give a hand. I really enjoyed stay in the kitchen. Besides, there were also not good kitchen moment. There was a time when the fire became really bigger and I was scared by them greatly. It took about a year of me to overcome my fear of fire. One day, my dad permitted me to start cooking on my own final. You couldn't imagine how happy I was.