（特别提示：要使用标准符号进行修改，否则不给分。每一行的错误都要写在行下，写在行上的不给分。）

Dear Ken,

    I am very exciting to learn that you're coming to Beijing for the Olympics. Both my parent miss you a lot. So do our friend, Cathy. August is the best time of the year to visit Beijing, because of there is only a few rain and the weather is neither too hot or too cold. There are so many places I want to take you after I finish my work like a volunteer. When you come, you can stay with ourselves. My home is about three kilometers away from the National Stadium, knowing as the “Bird's Nest”, where opening ceremony will be held.

Best regards,

Janet

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(Λ)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    I'll graduate from high school in half a year. I'm looking forward to be admitted to Hong Kong University for my college education. HKU enjoys a good reputation as its academic atmosphere or cultural tradition. It attract many outstanding students from different countries. As cheerful boy, I enjoy creating and designing objects, that gives me a great sense of achievement. Besides, I hope I can contribute to my country with my knowledges and abilities in the near future. I promise to work even more harder to meet the standard setting by HKU. I'd appreciate you if you could give me the chance.

增加： 在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删减: 把多余的词用斜线( \ )划掉。

修改： 在错词下面划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意： 1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2．只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起)不计分。

    My neighbor Li Hai is going to graduate college soon and he hasn't found the job yet. He was once advising to learn computer skills，so he thought it was difficult. When he saw others learning English，he shook his head，says it was too hard to remember the new word. He enjoyed watching TV，playing cards，smoking and so on. He felt it was hard for him to give up all this habits. Not long ago，he went to look for a job. When he knew that talents were great needed，he sighed and regretted the time that what he had wasted. How he wished he has worked hard in college!

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    One day, my little brother bought an ice cream in the street, enjoying to eating it. Unexpected, he saw his friend coming towards him, so he hurriedly hid the ice creams behind him. After he greeted his friend, they begin to talk. His friend had the dog with him. When he stopped to talk with his brother, his dog moved around. The dog was such glad to find the ice cream in my brother's hand and it began to eat it with greater pleasure. My brother felt embarrassed that he hadn't shared the ice cream for his friend, he gave the ice cream to the dog. Then he bought another two for his friend and himself.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在情的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词：

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第1l处起）不计分。

    Last Sunday, the weather were good. In the morning, I went the bookstore by bus. There were many new book in the bookstore. I didn't know which one to buy. At last, I decide to buy two English books because of I wanted to improve my English. In the afternoon, I went to the cinema with my classmates to see a film, that was Amazing China. A film was so wonderful that all of us were deep moved. One of my classmates said he would like to see them again. What a meaningful but happy day it was!

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号( ∧ )，并在其下面写出该加的词；

删除：把多余的词用斜线( \ )划掉；

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：⒈每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。

⒉只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

    The other day, we moved to the new school yard, where lies in the far north of the city. We were all on high spirits. It is much big than the old one. The classrooms are bright and clean. We have a lot of modern equipment, making convenient for students to learn every subject. Now we can have a lot of after-class activity on the new playground. Our teachers often play the basketball and soccer together with us. As spring approached, the flowers newly planting in the yard have just come out. With such many green trees and fragrant flowers around, we feel it less hardly to study and our school life more enjoyable.