假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文章共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有三处错误,每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(^),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下面画一横线,并在该词下面写作修改后的词。
注意:1). 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2). 只允许修改10处,多者(从11处起)不计分。
Dear Mrs. Green,
I am so glad to hear from you. While it has been several years since you taught us English, but I have missed you a lot, think about those happy moments we spent together. Actually, I have been doing pretty good in my studies as well as in my life. Apart from my academic studies, I always manage to find time for what I am interested. For example, I have successfully got admitted as a volunteer for a 13th National Games, which is scheduled to be hold at the end of this August. To get admitted, I have made good preparations in advance, trying to know as many as I could about my city, Tianjin.
By the way, it's my sincere hope that you can spare some times for a visit to Tianjin again, where has changed a lot since 2015.
I'd appreciated you if you could let me know beforehand whether you can come or not.
Yours