增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(/\)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\) 划掉。

修改： 在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起) 不计分。

    As the saying goes, many little drop of water make an ocean. A small action may lead to major changes took place in society. My friends and I had participated in a voluntary activity at a nursing home last week. We first did some cleaning or washing. After that we spent half an hour chatted with the old people living there. Though it was a tired day, we were happy with that we did. I felt a sense of responsibility by visiting the old. If all of us lend a helping hand to the people in need, they can live in harmony with each other. A society is just as a family. If we are willing to help others, our small actions can make big difference.

增加： 在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）, 并在其右面的横线上写出该加的词。

删除： 把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉，并在其右面的横线上写出多余的词，并用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改： 在错的词下划一横线，并在该词右面横线上面写出修改后的词。

注意：每句只有一处错误，多改不计分。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

    My cousin, Daniel, is the most success person I know, even though he has had many difficulties on his road to achieve success. His parents died in a accident when he was 17. Daniel needed to take care of his two younger brother, so he left school and found a job at a supermarket. At night, he helped them about homework and did all the housework. Daniel was also a very good worker. His boss was decided to help him go to college. It takes Daniel eight years, but finally he finished. Now Daniel plans attend a business management course and start his own business three years late. Daniel has a dream, but he is working hard to achieve it.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号( ),并在其下補写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    Last summer vacation, my family and I went to Qingdao by train. There were always sunshine and fresh air, where made us so comfortable. We went to the seaside but the sea was as blue as the sky. Bath in the sunshine on the beach was really a enjoyable thing. I also picked up a lot of colorful shell with my little sister.

    There we bought many interesting souvenirs; I planned to send they to my friends. We eat many things there, such as fish, prawns and so on. They were very delicious. Then we lived in a clean and tidy hotel, the price which was not so expensive.

    I like Qingdao very much, and if I get a chance, I hope to go there again; it is so a beautiful and interesting place.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

    This morning, I went to school by a bicycle as usual. As I am listening to my favorite music with a headphone on my head, I didn't notice a car parked on the roadside. I scratched the car and left a scar on it. Think that I would have classes, I left a note with his name and address to let the driver know what happened. Lately in the afternoon, while we were having a class meeting, our headmaster led in a stranger, that was the car owner. He explained the class the whole story but praised me. My teacher and classmate were impressed and pride of my honesty.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    Learning English is not so difficulty. I'm glad to give you some advices. First of all, be brave to express you in class. Speaking with others can great improve your fluency. Speaking is not about how large your vocabulary is. On a contrary, it is about how well you can use the words you know. Second, read as many as possible. There are many things can be learnt while reading. It was not until you read them for many times that you'll be able to write English correctly yourself. But in order to write well, you'd better to remember some good sentences and structures.