增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    A man requested on a wise man to help his son quit his bad habits. The wise man took the boy for walk in a garden. Suddenly he stopped to ask the boy to pull out a tiny plant there. The boy hold the plant between his thumb and forefingers and pulled it out. The man then asked him to pull out another plant what was a little big. The boy pulled hardly and the plant came out. “Now pull out that one,” said the man point to a bush. The boy tried his best but couldn't pull it out. “So it is the same with bad habits” said the wise man. “When you are weak, it is easy to pull them out, though when they become strong, they can't be rooted.”

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（ʌ），并在其下面写出该加的词；

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每句不超过两个错误；2. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一次；

    Hi, Janice,

    It's been a month since I came to this new school and I really want share with you some of the

    problems I have been experiencing.

    As I tell you last time, I made three new friend here. We hang out together during lunch and after school. We've been spending a lot of time sing in karaoke bars. It's been three Saturdays now and it really costs me many. And I started to see this as a time—wasting activity! In fact ,I don't like to go anymore, so I'm afraid I'll lose their friendship. How do you think I should do? If you are me ,would you talk to him?

    Please help with me and give me some advice.

    Grace

增加：把缺词处加个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。  

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。  

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    I went to see the film after supper. On my way to the cinema I met an English woman, that had lost her way.  I gave up the chance see the film and take her to her hotel. While go there, I told her about great changes   that had taken place here in the past few years and she told me something about her country.  Although I missed the film, but I still felt very happily. I had not only helped her out of trouble and practiced my speaking English. If I had not worked hard on English, I would not have been able to help him.

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。 修改：在错词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均限一词。

2．只允许修改 10 处，多者（从第 11 处起）不计分。

    Mr. Johnson is a hardworking teacher. Every day, he spends too much time with his work. With little sleep and hardly any break, so he works from morning till night. Hard work have made him very ill. "He has ruined his healthy. We are worried about him." That is which other teachers say. Yesterday afternoon, I paid visit to Mr. Johnson. I was eager to see him, but outside her room I stopped. I had to calm myself down. Quietly I step into the room. I saw him lying in bed, looking at some of the picture we had taken together. I understood that he missed us just as many as we missed him.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：⒈每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。

⒉只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    Last weekend, my parents and I went to visit my grandparents who live in the countryside. See us, my grandparents were very happy. I particular like their garden, where is full of vegetables and flowers. They also raise chickens, goose, cats, and dogs. Although the dogs and the cats was very friendly to me, but the chickens attacked me.

    My grandma prepare a big dinner for us and most of the dishes came the garden. We all liked the pollution-free vegetables. When we left, my grandpa picked a lot of fruits or vegetables from the garden for us to take home. I love their grandparents and the garden, too.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    Learning English is not so difficulty. I'm glad to give you some advices. First of all, be brave to express you in class. Speaking with others can great improve your fluency. Speaking is not about how large your vocabulary is. On a contrary, it is about how well you can use the words you know. Second, read as many as possible. There are many things can be learnt while reading. It was not until you read them for many times that you'll be able to write English correctly yourself. But in order to write well, you'd better to remember some good sentences and structures.