增加：把缺词处加个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    It isn't hard to grow up into a responsible members of society. I can well remember an incident that happens on a rainy Sunday afternoon. I was on my way to the bookstore and was waiting the green light at a crossing when a girl about ten was knocked on by a passing car, it drove off quickly. A man immediately rushed to a girl to give her first aid and I joined in without hesitation. Luckily she was not badly injured but we sent her to the nearest hospital. Comparing with the escaped driver, I am proud of what I did.

    As a member of the society, I am convinced of that being responsible is that it takes to make a better society.

此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（\ )划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。

此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（A )，在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。

此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。.

注意：原行没有错的不要改。

    All of us need friendship. The understanding
between two friends mean both of them have similar
ideas and trusting each other. Otherwise, it is
impossible for him to help each other and to make
their friendship to last long. As an old saying goes，
“A friend in need is a friend indeed.” So really friendship
should able to stand all sorts of tests. And it is
wise to have as many good friends that we can.
The more friends we have, the more we can learn for
one another, but the more pleasure we can share together.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    The best advice I received in my childhood was from my dad.He always gives me some advice,but I seldom took them seriously.One day he was encouraged me to participate in a speech competition.So I signed up and after the competition,I did my best to be full prepared.But the moment I stood on the stage,I was such nervous that my mind completely went blank. The experience of lose a competition was really painful.Then,my dad said,"My son,life is like battlefield.You have to lose many time to win the final victory."Thanks for his advice,I never give up when I do anything.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起) 不计分。

Dear Roy,

    I am glad to receive your letter ask for my advice on how to learn Chinese well.

    Here are a little suggestions. First, it is important to take a Chinese course, as you'll be able to learn the teachers and practice with your classmates. Then, it also helped to watch TV and read books, newspapers and magazines in Chinese whenever possibly.

    Besides, it should be a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs, so by doing so you'll learn and remember Chinese words much easily than usual. You can also make more Chinese friends. He will tell you a lot about China or you learn Chinese.

    Try and write to me in Chinese the next time.

    Best wishes.

Yours truly,

Li Hua

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1). 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词：

2). 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    I usually go to school by bike. And this morning I went on foot. On the way to school, I happen to witness an accident. A middle-aged woman was knocked down by a car while crosses the street. Seeing that was happening on the scene, I made rush for the woman to help. One passer-by got out of his cellphone and called the police. I helped carry the woman to safe and dress her wound. Around ten minutes late, an ambulance arrived and took him to hospital. I continued my way to school and felt happily that I could offer some help in time.