假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。

删除：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；   

2只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

      The summer holiday is coming. My classmates and I are talking about how to do during the holiday. We can chose between staying at home and take a trip. If we stay at home, it is comfortable but there is no need to spend money. But in that case, we will learn little about world. If we go on a trip abroad, we can broaden you view and gain knowledges we cannot get from books. Some classmates suggest we can go to places of interest nearby. I thought that it is a good idea. It does not cost many, yet we can still learn a lot.

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Dear Jim,

    I'd like to tell you something more about our school sports meet. It was holding on Oct. 6th, it was a fine day. There were over 1,000 students and teachers attended it. Wang Lin, a student from my class won the 100-meters race. He finished the race in 12.6 seconds and broke the school record. The sports meet was really success. That was because we were all trying to do my best. Although I was not one of the winner, I was proud of that we had done.

    Looking forward to receive your letter.

Yours,

 Li Ping

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1).每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2).只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    When Joe left university,she got a good job in the bike factory.But after he had been worked there for some years,he decided to have a change,so he put a notice in several newspaper.It stated what experience he had and the kind of job he will like to have.One of the answers he received was about a man looking for a job,too.This man wrote to him,"Dear sir,when you get a new job,being kind enough to give my name or address to your present boss as I have beer trying to find a position like yours for a long time."After he read the letter,he sudden realized he had done was really foolish.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1).每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2).只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    Many people who smoke say that smoking helps them think better. Therefore, I am afraid I cannot agree them. I am strong against smoking. First, smoking is bad for one's healthy. People who smoke often develop or even die of different diseases. Second, smoking polluted the air. People cannot work or study well in a room be full of smoke. Third, smoking wastes money. Every year, million of dollars are spent treat diseases caused by smoking. What we can see, smoking does more harm than good  and students should not pick out the habit.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改仅限一词。

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    It's true that the post-00's generation have some weakness. Some of them, for example, relied on their parents too much and tend to living comfortable lives. Some are even selfish and care much for others. However, in the other hand, the post-00's generation desire to learn more about the world around us. They are independent in thinking of. They always keep up modern science and technology and have many new ideas. I think the post-00's generation should develop their strong points and avoid weak points. They can try to tell a world that they are a hopefully generation.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词；

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉；

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：⒈每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

⒉只允许修改10处,多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear Mary,

    My name is Li Hua, a 18-year-old student from Eton middle school. To help the old people in the nursing home, my classmates and me will go there this Sunday. As the monitor of Class Two, I wanted to invite you to go with us.

    Here are some information about this activity. To begin with, we will leave for our school by bus at 8 a.m, but return at 5 p.m. Besides, there will be a lot of activity such as making dumplings and giving performances, that will be not only interesting but also meaningful.

    Hopeful, you will like the plan and join us. I have the confidence that we will have a great time there. Looking forward your reply and your decision.

Yours,

Li Hua