增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    I took our foreign teacher Mr. Brown, he came to China for the first time, to the Great Wall in last weekend. Having told about the history of the Great Wall, he was amazing at this world wonder. He was struck by the beautiful of the Great Wall. So I took photo of him, which would be a good memory for him. At the top, Mr. Brown was very interested in the activity of protecting the environment that he was eager to join in and then sign his name. Both the Great Wall or the Chinese people deep impressed him. He decided to visit more places of interest when free.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(Λ)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

①The function of smile is to show happiness and put people to ease.

②It is hard work as well as determination that have made him achieve everything he wanted.

③The actors in Disneyland brought much fun to the visitors, made them laugh happily.

④The boy's dream to take a trip to England has been come true.

⑤Body language makes possible for us to understand others better.

⑥Today most people around the world are more like to greet each other by shaking hands.

⑦To our great amuse, the kids performed on the stage in a funny way.

⑧News came from the school office which Fang Jianxun had been admitted to Tsinghua University．

⑨The detective novel is a attraction for me.

⑩Some parks are famous for traditional culture, other for showing the unique sights.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    My name is Li Hua, who is a Senior 3 student from Xing Guang Middle School. Every day I have to get up at 6:10 am, when much people are still sleeping. I'm busy with my studies when I have a lot of homework to do, which make me feel under great pressure. English is the subject in that I'm interested. When I feel stressed, I'll turn my best friend Mike for help. We have been best friend since we are very young. Whenever I'm in a trouble, he will cheer him up. Now I'm trying my best to prepare for the college entrance examination. I hope to be admit into Anhui University.

增加：在此处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出修改的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在其下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从十一处起）不计分。

    Our school photography club is going to held an International High School Student Photography Show.

    As far as I know, the theme of the show is environmental protection. Actually, I know you are gifted in take good pictures and had always wanted to do something for environmental protection. I clearly remember you showed me some photo on that theme the last time when you visited our school. Beside, it will start on June 15^th and last three weeks. What makes me exciting is that any student whom is interested can participate in it. In word, I firmly believe this is surely a good chance for more people to see them. If you want to join, send my photos to photoshow@126.com.

Looking forward to hearing from you soon.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

    It is a pity that you don't want to take part in the speech contest. As far as I am concern, the speech contest can benefit from you in different ways. To begin with, it urges you to look for more information about your favorite scientists on the Internet or in the library, and learning more about them. Beside, it is a challenge to make preparation for a speech contest. Not only you have to write a good article, but also have to perform them properly. What's more, you can make some new friends in the contest. I suggest you considered participating in the contest, what will really do good to you. If you change your mind, please let me know as soon as possibly.