增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1).每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2).只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    I left home at 17 and pay my own way through college.In the past 20 years,I have worked for everything I needed.So it shocks me what some people in their 20s,still get their life supported by our parents.Some of these parents have difficult supporting their families.

    It's true that the job market is much more harder these days.Therefore,there are certainly some ways to make living on our own.Even if our parents is nice enough to pay for our college,we shouldn't burden them with our problems.We should be financial responsible adults,made our parents proud of us.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear Mr. Smith,

    I'm writing to invite you to the Traditional Chinese Cultural Fair be held by our school at the Art Center this Friday afternoon, at 2p.m .to 5p.m.

    Since a event aims to help more people learn about the traditional Chinese culture, the staff, all the students and their parents as well as anyone interested in it is welcome. At the fair, relating books, pictures, videos and objects will be exhibited, through that visitors will not only understand traditional Chinese culture better but definitely feel about the unique beauty of it.

    If you were interested, please come and enjoy them. And I'd be glad to offer any helps. Looking forward to your early reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的 词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第 11处起)不 计分。

    During the weekend I traveled by air for the first time at my life. I generally travel by bus or train, where is both cheaper but safer. This was a short journey. In beginning I did not feel very happily, but this feeling did not last long. The journey is very exciting. I was soon high up in the sky among the cloud. The views of mountains, fields and rivers were interesting. I enjoyed me in the short and comfortable journey very much. This experience has shown that traveling by the air is actually the safest way of make journeys.

增加：把缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

    I enjoy do many things in my spare time. I read many kind of books and newspapers. The stories and news in them is very interesting. I was also a music lover and my favorite sing is Whitney Houston. In order to be healthily and strong, I often go running in the morning. In the afternoon, I will play the basketball with my classmates. When I am doing sports, I forget all her troubles and worries. Reading books, listening music and doing sports are all very good for both my health or my studies.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    I am very luckily to have the opportunity to see so many place, but sometimes I experience culture shock when I see or do something new. Dad and I now are travelled through Denmark, Norway and Sweden. I used to thinking that these countries are the same, but not any more. People in Denmark are a bit of friendlier, while Norwegians and Swedes prefer not to talk to strangers. I'm surprised to learn that many people there speak English in addition their national languages. In Sweden, it seems that anyone has golden hair and blue eyes. I feel a little strange with my black hair and dark eyes. I imagine this is that foreigners feel when they visit China!

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉；

修改：在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：①每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

②只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    This morning I found pink wallet in the canteen. Girls usual like pink, so I believed the wallet was belonged to a girl student. I opened it, try to find out whose it was. Therefore, I found nothing but 150 yuan in it. I was wondering what to do with it while suddenly my classmates Liu Yan passed by. She suggested she put up a Lost and Found notice and I did so. I wrote down my telephone number and ask the owner to call me after she saw it. Later, a girl came to claim it on 3 o'clock this afternoon.