文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多着（从第11处起）不计分。

    With the development of people's living condition, more and more people possess their own cars. Some of us think it is good to own a car. For instance, it's convenient, fast and comfortable means of transportation. Moreover, it shows that people are becoming richer and the country is much more stronger. It also made relative businesses and industries develop faster.

    However, others have different opinions, thinking that cars give up waste gasses and pollute the environment around. Too much cars will have some bad effects, such as more accidents and crowdedness. Besides, lack parking lots is another big problem.

    As far as I'm concerned, we ought to think careful before buying cars. As if we have cars, we may use it less.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1）．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2）．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

    Some phones had become part of our daily life. No matter who we are, we can see people busy play with their smart phones. Smart phones benefit them. They help us escape the pressure of life and get informations. However, if we spend too much time on them, we won't have time to contact face to face our friends and family. And our life, study and work will hurt. In my view, we should limit to our using smart phones except for a purpose of learning. Meanwhile, it's absolute necessary for us to take part in more outdoors activities.

①My school looks similar from the one in the picture.

②They reach for excellence, not just in classroom achievements also in the development of character.

③Next to the table is her books which she read the night before.

④There is a serious competition for a place at university.

⑤Pupils have to repeat after the teacher again.

⑥They live in a society which education is very important.

⑦She gets home at midnight and falls asleep, completely exhausting.

⑧They continue their commitment to being their best at all time.

⑨I felt too shy that I didn't dare to say anything before the class.

⑩I had to go to school without breakfast in hurry.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    Three years ago I failed an important exam in my life and became a student at a ordinary school. Although I felt disappointed at the shabby campus and my poorly－equipped classroom, but I found the teachers impatient and considerate. Beside, I enjoyed the friendly atmosphere in class. I decide to make the best it. I worked hard and got along good with my teachers and classmates. Whenever I had difficulties, they are always available, Soon, I became one of the top student in my class, that greatly increased my confidence and got me motivated. My experience tells me that it is not what you are given but how you make use of it that determines who we are.

    On my fourteen birthday, I received lots of presents. Which present is the best in my eye? It's hand-made notebook, that my best friend Jane gave to me. Jane makes it by herself. On each page of the notebook, there's a picture for Jane and me with some words. She either encourages me or tell me how she feels about our friendship. Every time I look at the notebook, I'm touching by something warm. This present is a memory of the wonderfully time we've spent together. I will be keep this special gift forever.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词；

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉；

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：⒈每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

⒉只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    I feel betray by my friend Hannah. On Monday, we had a surprise math quiz. I must have sounded very proud of me after the quiz, saying what easy it was. The next day after class, my math teacher told me that I had lowest grade in the class. I was very upset that I felt like crying. I thought that Hannah should have told my classmates about my grade after promise not to. I was so angry that I went straight to Hannah and told her we weren't going to be friends any more because she couldn't keep her words. She was really upset and swore that she hasn't told anyone, but I didn't believe her explanation. I don't think I can ever truly forgive to her.