文中共有10处语言错误, 错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号( )，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用(＼)划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1）.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2）.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    This is a story was told by my father: “When I was boy, the most excited thing was to celebrate the Spring Festival. My grandma was the best cooker in the world but could make the most delicious dishes. One time, I just couldn't wait for the Spring Festival dinner. As I was about take a piece from a cooked duck, I saw Grandma in the kitchen looking at me. Shake her head, she said, ‘It isn't a good time to do that, dear.' At once I apologize and controlled me at my best till the dinner started. You know, that was a dinner I had waited for several month.”

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（/\），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    In my view, the Internet is helpful. It is known to all, the Internet is playing important part in our daily life. On the Internet, we can read news home and abroad and got as much informations as we can. We can also attend to the net school and read many books. We can even do shopping online. Besides, your ability to operate the computer can be improved great. So we should not be addicted to the Internet, or we'll get our life and study destroying. In addition, we should keep off the harm websites. Anyhow, this doesn't prevent the Internet from becoming our friend.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

    Last Saturday afternoon, a charity sale held on our school playground. Although it was no easy task, students active participated in it.

    To organize it successfully, we' made full preparations. After the sale, from the students we collected variously second-hand goods which were still in good condition and classify them. Then came the big day. With all the teachers and students involve, the activity turned out to be successful. We raised 5,000 yuan for total at the end of the activity. All the money we raised up will go to the students from poor family to help finish their studies. It's so a meaningful activity that students look forward to the next charity sale.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧), 并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

    It is clearly shown that many middle school students have physical and mentally problems. 68% of the students surveying have studying anxiety as well as poor eyesight too. And a larger percentage lacks sleep. 52% are short of physical exercise. 42% of the students won't obey our parents or teachers. Personally, I think we student should balance physical exercise and studies. Without good health, one can't achieve anything. However, too much attention has been paid only on studies. As a result, I suggest we are given less homework, but more time will be left for afterschool activities. Only in this way can we live energetic and healthy life.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    Personally, I think honesty education is basic necessity. First of all, course on honesty should be offered to students, and activities like story-telling and lectures are also worth tried.

    With the concept of "being honest" deep rooted in their minds, honesty can be reflected in our daily life and study. Besides, related rules and regulations should be applied for evaluate students in aspects such as homework, tests, and relationships with teachers and parents. Last but not least, we'd like strict measures carrying out to punish those that cheat constantly. As a result, they must take responsibility for their bad habits, thus reducing chances of cheating the next time. If everyone follow these ideas, the world will become better!

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号∧，并在其下面写出该加的词；

删除：把多余的词用(＼)划掉；

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    The children next door often play the football in the garden after my house and sometimes break my windows. Last Saturday afternoon I stay at home and read a book. After while, I closed my eyes and went to sleep. A loud knock on the door made me wake up suddenly. Soon a little boy turned out. "You haven't broken one of my window again?" I asked. "Oh, no!" answered the boy. "Your windows are all opened this time and our football was in your bedroom. Could you mind getting in to get our ball?" I was at a loss at the moment.