假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同学写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下面画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    While I was taking a walk in the park near my home, I came across a crew make a new movie with one of my favorite actors in last Sunday morning. I didn't have my camera with me at that time, but I rushed back home to get it. Unfortunate, by the time I got back, they have finished the scene. And the actors couldn't be seen everywhere. I was really disappointing and about to leave when he walked out a building. He was right there in front of me! I couldn't believe my luck— not only did I have my photo taken with her, but he signed his name on my shirt！

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    The teenage year from 13 to 19 were the most difficult time for me. They were also the best and worse years in my life. At the first，I thought I knew everything and could make decisions by yourself. However，my parents didn't seem to think such. They always tell me what to do and how to do it. At one time, I ever felt my parents couldn't understand me so I hoped I could be freely from them. I showed them I was independent by wear strange clothes. Now I am leaving home to college. At last，I will be on my own，but I still want to have my parents to turn to whenever need help.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧), 并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

    It is clearly shown that many middle school students have physical and mentally problems. 68% of the students surveying have studying anxiety as well as poor eyesight too. And a larger percentage lacks sleep. 52% are short of physical exercise. 42% of the students won't obey our parents or teachers. Personally, I think we student should balance physical exercise and studies. Without good health, one can't achieve anything. However, too much attention has been paid only on studies. As a result, I suggest we are given less homework, but more time will be left for afterschool activities. Only in this way can we live energetic and healthy life.

增加： 在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词.

删除： 把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉.

修改： 在错词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词.

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分.

    Many a student who wants to study abroad after high school dream of living in a fancy house. One approach to find accommodation（住所） is by applying to a dormitory through your school's official website. The other is by searching rental advertisements. Once you've found a place that interests you, there are many map applications, that can help you get an idea of the area.

    During my stay in Sydney, I chose to rent a house. I moved four time in those two years. Their first place was a double room in a brand﹣new house having found on the internet. Since it was located closely to the university, the price was much higher as expected. In Australia, rent is paid on weekly basis, and you must pay four weeks of rent as a deposit（押金） when you move in. That was quite a financial burden.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词；

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉；

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改词均仅限一词。

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    There may be two mainly reasons for the popularity of English in China in recent year: the economic(经济的)reform and the open policy. With the development of international trade and co-operation, English as the international language play a more and more important role. The demand for people known English is increasing. The labor market requires you to do business with foreign companies, to open foreign markets, and to learn to use up advanced technology from abroad. They are also needed to participate international affairs. University students who English level is high are easily employed and well pay. This encourages people to learn English.

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：

1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

    Last Sunday, I went to the zoo with Lily. There was lots of people there. I found a girl cry in the zoo. She was lost and can't find her mother. We decided to help her. I tried my best find the broadcasting station in the zoo. On the same time Lily played with her and looked after her careful there. The little girl stopped crying played with Lily. At last his mother came, that made me feel very happy. I thought I really did a good thing. If everyone helps with each other, the world will become more beautiful.