增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；   2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    Last Thursday we go to Mianshan Mountain for our autumn outing.We got the foot of the mountain at 9 am. Following the long path, they began to climb.After some time,we were all tiring.We had a very shortly rest and moved on.At last,we succeeded in getting to the top,on which we kept laughing and jump.It was seemed that we were the happiest people in the world.We took some photo there,and then sat down but had something to eat.At 3 pm, we began to go down.It was a interesting and unforgettable day and all of us wished the autumn of our country would be with us forever.

增加、删除或修改。

增加： 在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）, 并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除： 把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线（）,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：

1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处, 多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Last night I was preparing for the coming examination while the noise from my neighbor interrupts me. The noise went on and on. It was so loud that I could hard pay attention to my study any longer. So I went to my neighbor's house but said to him: “Excuse me, would you please turn down the TV? I'm preparing for tomorrow's exam.” When he heard these word, his face went the red. And he said, “I'm sorry to have made so much noise. Just now, the football game was very wonderful. I'm too exciting to control me. I won't do that again. Good lucky in your coming exam.” After that, I got down my study.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1).每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

      2).只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear Ms Brown,

    I'm writing this letter to express my thanks to you for help me with my English study during the past three years. I can still remember how poor mine English was when I came to senior high school. But I even felt frightened each time I attended an English class. Know this, you communicated with me patiently and let me know the important of learning English well. Then you taught me to work hard unless I wanted to succeed and even spent many of your free time helping me. With your help, I have made a great progress. I want to tell you the news that I had been admitted to a key university up to now.

    You are such a good teacher you have made my dream come true. Thank you.

Yours,

Tom

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词；

删除：把多余的词用(＼)划掉；

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词；

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear Ms. Smith,

    I am secretary of the City Student Union(CSU). We were organizing an art exhibition for high school students in city. This will be held on the 9^th of July in the Exhibition Hall of Beihai. More than 1000 painting will be on show, but high school students and teachers from all the eight districts will come to the event. As you are very popularly with us Chinese high school students, we'd like to invite for you to the exhibition. We would be grateful when you could join them that day.

    Looking forward to hear from you soon.

Yours,

Li Hua

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（^），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：①每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

②只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    John, a heavy smoker, once feel bad-tempered. His hands started shaking and he coughed a lot, so he turned to his doctor for help. "Quit smoking," the doctor advised. Find the advice sensible from several points, such as money, healthy, and cleanliness, John decided to give up smoking. However, for several hour without a cigarette, John was nervous and had a difficulty in concentrating, inability to sleep, what made him more hungry for a cigarette. He said to himself, "One more, I will quit it tomorrow. Tomorrow will be a suitable day of me to break away from the bad habit…" Then he picked up a cigarette which made her relaxed. Again and again John made up his mind to do it "tomorrow". Today John is still addicted for smoking.