增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下面画一横线，并在该词下面写作修改后的词。

注意：1). 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2). 只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不计分。

Dear Mrs. Green,

    I am so glad to hear from you. While it has been several years since you taught us English, but I have missed you a lot, think about those happy moments we spent together. Actually, I have been doing pretty good in my studies as well as in my life. Apart from my academic studies, I always manage to find time for what I am interested. For example, I have successfully got admitted as a volunteer for a 13^th National Games, which is scheduled to be hold at the end of this August. To get admitted, I have made good preparations in advance, trying to know as many as I could about my city, Tianjin.

    By the way, it's my sincere hope that you can spare some times for a visit to Tianjin again, where has changed a lot since 2015.

    I'd appreciated you if you could let me know beforehand whether you can come or not.

Yours

增加：在缺单词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    It was a sunny day today and I went to Xishan Park for a spring outing. The moment I entered in the park, a variety of beautiful flowers and green trees come into sight. Attracted by the beauty, I couldn't stop taking photo. As I wandered along the path, enjoy the beautiful view, I noticed something unpleasantly. Two schoolgirls jumped the fence to pick flowers. Obviously they didn't realize that their behavior had done great damage on the beauty of the park. Without delay, I went up and stopped them politely. Quite embarrassing, the two girls came out immediately. Then we took pictures outside the fence. Seeing that, I smiled and something looked nicer in my eyes.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    One day I went with my dad to a store near our home. Just inside the door stood the most beautiful bicycle I have ever seen. No other kids in our town rode one like it. My dad must have noticed it. Bend down, he asked if I liked the bicycle, who price was a little high. I nodded. To my surprise, he bought it without any hesitate. I felt quite excitedly.

    Later, my father shared with me his experiences of those of his school day. My grandparents had no money for even such the thing as a pencil, and he never dared to ask my grandpa for one. Tears filled with Dad's eyes whatever he recalled his childhood. He said he would do his best get his child what he wanted.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(^)，并在此符号下面写出该加的词；

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉；

修改：在错词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者从第11处不计。

    My favorite cartoon character is "Doraemon" creating by Japanese manga artist Fujiko F. Fujio. He was official given life in a factory on September 3, 2112. In the cartoon, Doraemon traveled back in time from the 22nd century help the character Nobita Nobi. She is famous for the tools that come out of a fourth-dimension pocket on his stomach, and one of his most famous tool is "anywhere door" what allows people to travel anywhere they wish. After the cartoon debuted in December, 1969, Doreamon gained great popular rapidly. Now, he is also considered as the icon of Japanese culture both in home and abroad. In 2008, Japanese government appoints Doraemon as "anime ambassador" in the order to promoting Japanese animated cartoons.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词；

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉；

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

 注意：⒈每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

⒉只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    China is a country that playing table tennis is quite popular. Wang Wei is fond about this sport. Malong is one of the great players in the world so that she admires him a lot. Those inspiring story of his success have encouraged children to practice table tennis at early age. Competitions are being organized for schools to compete against each other every year. Last year, Wang Wei was lucky admitted as a school team member. She worked hard and won the first place with her amazed performance. When she received the gold medal, a sense of pride arise in her heart. Since then, she has been dreaming of win more medals in the future.