增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1).每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2).只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    As we all know it, health is very important to us students. Here are some tips on how to grow up healthily.

    Some students at school were too addicted to phones and computers, which does harm to their health. Therefore, you are strong advised to rid you of them. In addition, sparing some time to build up your body on a regular basis to make you energetic and relaxing. Above all, attach great importance on making friends and communicating with others. Taking active part in various voluntary activities can also be of great beneficial.

    I hope that the suggestion above will make a difference.

增加： 在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删减: 把多余的词用斜线( \ )划掉。

修改： 在错词下面划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意： 1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2．只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起)不计分。

    My neighbor Li Hai is going to graduate college soon and he hasn't found the job yet. He was once advising to learn computer skills，so he thought it was difficult. When he saw others learning English，he shook his head，says it was too hard to remember the new word. He enjoyed watching TV，playing cards，smoking and so on. He felt it was hard for him to give up all this habits. Not long ago，he went to look for a job. When he knew that talents were great needed，he sighed and regretted the time that what he had wasted. How he wished he has worked hard in college!

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

    Last Saturday, I went on journey by train. There were such many passengers that not everyone could get a seat. Many people had to stand, which was really tired. I had a reserved seat so I could sit comfortable. In front of my seat is a woman with two little kids. With the kid squeezing into their single seat, she had to stand up all the way. So I moved a bit but shared my seat with her. The woman felt very grateful to my selflessness. Seeing her beautiful smile, I also smiled. Share increased happiness!

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词；

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉；

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    Being a senior student, I like English more than any other subject. Besides take English lessons at school, I go to the English Corner in the park where is near my home on Saturday mornings. It was set up two years ago, for purpose of helping students make progresses in English. Many high school students regular gather there. Sometimes some college students or even foreign friends are present at the English Corner. Here we practice spoken English, talking about what we are interested in and sharing with our experience in learning English. My English had been greatly improved since I attended them for the first time.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Today was my father's birthday, so I decided to bake a cake for him. I didn't know how make a cake. I couldn't tell my father because of I wanted to give him a surprise. It was my firstly attempt, so I searched on the Internet and found much videos there. I choose the best one. I saw the full videos and started baking. First I collected all the things which might be needed to bake a cake. And then, I followed the steps and finally my cake was ready. Last, I decorated the cake by chocolates so that it looked more delicious. Then I gave the cake to his father and he was really surprising.