增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1）.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

      2）.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    In my mind, I could never fancy how ten second of life could change a person's view for his whole existence. A few years ago I experience the worst moment in my life. I was driving home that afternoon. Unfortunately, I didn't make it home as usually because I had a car accident. While I was driving, all of a sudden, but the car in front of me stopped. My car immediately ran into it. Luckily, I wasn't serious hurt. That accident changed way I drive and they taught me a valuable lesson. I also came to the conclusion which life needs to be treasuring.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    As we all know, we can meet with various challenges in our life. Faced with challenges, how should we do?

    Last month, our class climbed Mount Tai, that is more than 1,500 meters above sea level. Lacking exercise, I thought that this activity was great challenge for me. I felt very exhausted halfway that I wanted to give up. See this, my classmates and even some strangers encourage me. By the end, I managed to reach on the top of the mountain.

    Therefore, don't give up in face of challenges. If you are determined enough, it's certainly that you can overcome it.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线〔\〕划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear Mr. Smith,

    I'm so gladly to hear from you. With the college entrance examination around a corner, I am busy in preparations for it. Meanwhile, owed to my great interest in sports, I pay close attention to the 13^th National Games which will held in Tianjin at the end of July. And the good news I want to tell you is what I have become a volunteer for it. In order to have a good performance, I have made a great many of preparations for it. After class, I often surf the Internet to get many information about the history and culture of Tianjin. Practicing my oral English is also becoming his schedule.

    I did hope you can visit Tianjin again in the near future.

Yours,

Li Hua

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    Yesterday I went to the park and happened see a touching event. Three teenager friends were boating on the lake, taken photos, when a girl of them fell into the water. She was struggling and the other one cried out for help repeated. It was clear why they couldn't swim. Then a man ran to the lake quickly. Without taking on his clothes, he jumped into the water and swim towards the girl. He carried her to the lakeside and she was saved from danger at the last!

    How happily the girl's friends became! Before they thought of thanking the man, she had left.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    In order enrich students' school life, many schools offer all kind of after-school activities. I think that participated in after-school activities is beneficial to students. Therefore, every the student should take part in at most one after-school activity. That you choose is up to you. Any after-school activity that actual attracts you is OK, for example, a drama. After-school activities not only helps you relieve stress, and broaden your minds. Above all, they are good with character building through time management, teamwork and strong competition.