假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    It doesn't matter to fail as long as you don't give up. To my opinion, it is hard to be successful. Challenges were a necessary part of your life as you grow up. And you won't necessary succeed in everything for the first time you try. That's okay. Some of the most successful people in the world are the one who've had the most failures. J．K. Rowling, wrote Harry Potter, had her first Harry Potter book was rejected 12 times before it was finally published. Michael Jordan was removed his high school basketball team. He lost hundreds of games and miss thousands of shots during his career. But he once said, “I have failed over and over and over again in my life. And that's because I succeed.”

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（/\），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：每句错误及其修改均仅限一词。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写上该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改l0处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Hi, Janice,

    It's been a month since I came to this school and I really want share with you some of the problems I have been experiencing.

    As I tell you last time, I made three new friend here. We hang out together during lunch and after school.

    We've been spending a lot of time sing in karaoke bars. It's been three Saturdays now and it really costs me many. And I started to see this as a time-wasting activity! In fact, I don't like to go anymore, so I'm afraid I'll lose their friendship. How do you think I should do? If you are me, would you talk to him?

    Please help with me and give me some advice.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（︿），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除；把多余的词用斜线（ \  ）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    In my school life, a most unforgettable person is my math teacher. Not only did she helped us in class but also after class. I still remember the time that I got a “B” in the final exam. I liked math best and the teacher took pride in me all the time. However, I failed. I felt so disappointing that I lost my energy and patience. Then one day, I happened meet her in the street, and my face turned red right away. She told me not to give up and encourage me to work much more harder. Later, he offered me a great many suggestion on learning math. In addition, she cared for my feelings. Under her help, I made great progress.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧ ），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线( \ )划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    Dr. Hunter got a phone call in one night. He was asked to go to the hospital at once to operate a seriously wounded boy. It was 30 mile away. And it was snowing heavy. He thought he could get there before midnight. Therefore, he was stopped by a man in an old black coat a few minutes late. Gun in hand, the man was in the old black coat ordered the doctor to get out of the car and drove down the road, left the doctor in the falling snow. When the doctor arrived at the hospital, he was told the boy has died an hour before. By the door of the waiting room sat a man in the old black coat with his head in his hands.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均限一词。

2．只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

    Last summer, I got a young pet dog. I named him with Max after my favorite toy robot. The next day, I called her like this: “Come here, Max!” Then he comes up to me. I told him to getting on the bed. Strange, he went to the bathroom. Although it was very hot, I thought that Max wanted to go for swim, so I put him into a pool. To my surprises, he enjoyed himself very much in the water. Now Max has grown more bigger and follows me no matter where I go. He had brought me a lot of happiness.