增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1).每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2).只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    Mary has been award the title of “Star Student of the Week” for what she did for our class. In the hot afternoon of last Saturday, Mary went downtown and walked from one store to another, looked for the costumes we would wear in the singing contest. While the rest of us were enjoying our leisure times in comfortable classrooms, she spent the whole afternoon searching for and selecting. Finally, she finds the right clothes. Deep moved by her efforts, we tried our best and won first prize in the contest. Mary is warm-hearted so cares about the class. She deserves the honor and we should learn from him.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    I was playing at my cousin house. Since his family was rich than mine, he had more toys than I did. There was one on particular I'd always wanted. I put into my pocket when he wasn't looking. I guessed, even at that age, I would never be able to enjoy to playing with the toy or faced my cousin again; I would always know I'd done something wrong. Late on, my aunt drove me home. When she dropped me off, I pulled out the toy slow and gave it back. She knows what had happened, but she thanked me and ever mentioned it again.

增加： 在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧), 并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除： 把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改： 在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意： ⒈每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

⒉只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起)不计分。

    I am grateful to my English teacher Susan, at whose help I couldn't have won first prize in the English Talent Competition for high school student last week.

    I used to be poorly in spoken English. I was too shy to speak in class. Since she teaches us last term, she has been encouraging him to overcome fear and speak out in class. Thanks to her, I have made great progresses. Besides, I practiced several times in the front of her.  It was her advice which made me a better speaker and full of confidence.  But I owe my success to her.

    Susan set a good example to me. I am determined to become an English teacher when I grow up.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

    Dream is a common word in our daily life. As we all know, people liked to use it to express the strong desires they have for our future. Some young people dream of become scientists when others wish to become astronauts.

    In my opinion, what matter most is that we should be responsible our society and its citizens. I want to be independent and have a strongly sense of responsibility. And also I want to be helpful to those in the trouble. Beside, I will learn modestly from those devoting themselves to our society. I do hope all of us can make every efforts to live our dreams.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改仅限一词。

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    I brought up by my grandmother. She was one of the people that I loved them most. I didn't know what to pay her back except spending more time on her. My grand-mother had a poor memory. One Sunday, we took a walk in the park. When her neighbor greeted her, she just stared at them, unable to recognize who they are. It made me feel quite sadly. It was like take a little child for a walk. But that day I enjoyed our walking as I held her hand. That was a last walk we ever took together in the park before she was taken to hospital. Less than a year late, she was gone.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：⒈ 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

⒉ 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    When I was 12, I met Jane in a college, which came to China with her parents. Her parents teach English at that time. We soon made friend with each other. Her Chinese was very well while I had difficulty speak English. In order to help me my English, she spoke as much English as she could when we were together. Before long, I could speak English well but at the same time I also made a great progress in my written English. Unfortunately, a year later, Jane returned home with his parents. And we had been out of touch with each other since then.