增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改9处，多者(从第10处起)不计分。

Dear Bob,

    I am very exciting to receive an e-mail from you and I am glad to know  you have a wonderful time during the past summer holiday. I took a trip to the countryside with some of my friend in last summer. Country life, in your opinion, gave me relaxation, which  I can't enjoy in big cities. There was river nearby, in that we went swimming every now and then. You can never imagine how fun it was to swim together with friends in the cool, clean river in so hot days. In fact, I had never had a better holiday before and I took plenty of photos there. I keep the photos where I can see them every day, as they are worth keep forever.

Yours,

Tom

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均限一词;

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    The old saying “The early bird catches the worm” show us the importance of planning, working hard and trying constant. To achieve outstanding results, people must plan ahead of and work diligently to overcome all kind of difficulties.

    That has been my own experience, either. When I first started at high school, I seldom passed my exams, so I never prepared well. Later, my teacher, Mr. Black, advised me plan everything in advance. She asked me to study hard as well. After a year of putting his advice onto practice, I can now easily pass all my exams.

    There are no shortcuts to succeed.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    I once bought the beautiful bracelet from a store and felt excited when I tried it on. Sadly, I was soon disappointed at that my naughty kids broke it. But instead of just feel sad, I chose to repair it myself.

    To my greatly surprise, it didn't take a long time to do it. As time went by, I found that I was not happy with just repairing my breaking bracelets. I started making new bracelets out the materials from my old one. Later on, I begin to design on my own.

    Then I made my first deal. Back in 2013, I posted my bracelets on WeChat for the first time and several friends said that they wanted it. That was just the start. With many materials at hand, I made my designs into real.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(/\)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\) 划掉。

修改： 在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起) 不计分。

    One month before, with the College Entrance Examination around the corner, I was nervous and in low spirit because of my poor performance. When I was at the loss and on the point of giving up, my head teacher comforted me and discuss with me the reasons for my failure in the exam. More unforgettable, he managed to help me with my study and inspired us. Determined to live up the expectations of my teachers and my parents, I devoted myself to solve all the problems in my study and then made progress. l'm more than grateful for that he has done for me. I've got to know it is never too much late to get back when there is still hope.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear Sir or Madam,

    I'm Li Hua, passenger on the flight number BA 793 of your company. I take the flight from America on December 3, 2015. Unlucky, I found one of my suitcases losing at the airport. Here I am eagerly writing to you to ask for helps.

    The suitcase is a black mid-sized one with your name tagged on the handle, which contains many important personal files and some scientific materials. It took me much time and energy to get them but they are valuable in my scientific study. Beside, there are some presents I bought them for my friends and family members.

    I'm looking forward to hear good news from you.

Yours truly,

Li Hua

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）画掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：①每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。

②只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    English is very important for us, so many students don't know what to learn it well. Many student even show no interest to it. Two years ago, my English was poor and I don't know what to do. My teacher knew I loved the music very much, so she suggested that I listened to a lot of English songs. I followed her advices. Later, I fell in love with English. In order to better understanding the songs, I started learning English hard. Now I can speak English fluent. If you also want learn English well, you can listen to some English songs, too.