Dear Editor,

    I am writing tell you about the discussion we've had about whether it is necessary of middle school students to have mobile phones. Most students think this is more convenient for them to keep in the touch with their parents and classmates. And what's much, it's a fashion. However, most teachers think middle school students are not old enough to control them. It is a waste of time for students to play games and sending messages on their mobile phones. Therefore, it is easy to make students contact with each other. In my opinion, following the fashion was understandable. But as middle school student, we should put all our energy into our study.

Yours truly,

Mary

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    We had a discussion on “overnight-fame” last week. Nowadays, many people were crazy about instant fame and wealthy. To be honest, it is not bad be famous or have a lot of money, but I don't agree with the view which people rise to fame overnight. We all know “easy come, easy go”. Let's take Li An as the example. Only after his hard work did he become successful. Or we can list more similar cases if need. What I do believe is that the process in which we try our best. It is we have experienced along the way to success that we treasure and enjoy mostly.

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注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

3）必须按答题要求做题，否则不给分。

    Today is the happy day in this holiday. Although I was very tired, but I found myself in these busy days. I am afraid of taking a bus usual; the awful smell of the bus drives me mad, make me feel carsick. But today I did feel carsick. I can defeat carsickness finally. At night I went out with an old friend I ever liked him, but all of us were so busy with examinations at the high school that we hadn't been together. I was much surprised when I received his call that I could hardly believe my ears. At first, I think we would never meet before we graduated. Thank him for giving me a happy day!

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2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    I hardly remember my grandmother. She used to holding me on her knees and sing old songs. I was only four when she passes away. She is just a distant memory for me now. I remember my grandfather very clear. He was tall, with broad shoulder and a beard that turned from black toward gray over the years. He had a deep voice who set him apart from others in our small town, he was strong and powerful. In a fact, he even scared his classmates away when they came over to play or do homework with me. However, he was the gentlest man I have never known.

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2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Dear Laura,

    Thanks for letting us to stay at your seaside house. Now, you might have heard from your neighbors about which happened on Saturday evening. When I was out a walk, my younger son, Tom, played football before your house. He made so many noise that the neighbors got quite angrily. Even worse, Tom broke one of the window of Mr. Wilson's house. Tom and I apologized to all the neighbors for the unhappy happenings, but promised to have the broken window repair soon. Tom said that we would not do such silly things any more. I am glad that your neighbors had forgiven us. They are really nice people.

Yours,

Betty