我 遥 望

曾 卓

                                                                                                                  当我年轻的时候，

                                                                                                                  在生活的海洋中，偶尔抬头

                                                                                                                  遥望六十岁，像遥望

                                                                                                                  一个远在异国的港口

                                                                                                                  经历了狂风暴雨，惊涛骇浪

                                                                                                                  而今我到达了，

                                                                                                                  有时回头

                                                                                                                   遥望我年轻的时候，

                                                                                                                   像遥望

                                                                                                                   迷失在烟雾中的故乡

夜宿七盘岭^①

（唐）沈俭期

独游千里外，高卧七盘西。

山月临窗近，天河入户低。

芳春平仲^②绿，清夜子规啼。

浮客空留听，褒城^③闻曙鸡。

首联破题，说自己将作远游，此刻夜宿七盘岭。“独游”显示出无限失意的情绪。

①颔联即写夜宿所见的远景，生动地表现出高卧的情趣，通过诗句“我”仿佛看到了这样的画面：{#blank#}1{#/blank#}。

颈联是写夜宿的节物观感，纤巧地抒发了“独游”的愁思。

②“空”字平淡中蕴含深意，结合全诗，可作这样的赏析：{#blank#}2{#/blank#}。

【注】①这首诗作于作者被流放途中，夜宿七盘岭之时。七盘岭在今四川广元东北。②平仲：银杏的别称。③褒城：地名，在今陕西汉中北。