增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起) 不计分。

Dear Roy,

    I am glad to receive your letter ask for my advice on how to learn Chinese well.

    Here are a little suggestions. First, it is important to take a Chinese course, as you'll be able to learn the teachers and practice with your classmates. Then, it also helped to watch TV and read books, newspapers and magazines in Chinese whenever possibly.

    Besides, it should be a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs, so by doing so you'll learn and remember Chinese words much easily than usual. You can also make more Chinese friends. He will tell you a lot about China or you learn Chinese.

    Try and write to me in Chinese the next time.

    Best wishes.

Yours truly,

Li Hua

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
 Hi Chris

    I think going to a gym is a good way to keep health and strong. If your friend wants to be stronger, and he should try to go there more often.

    Yes, there have some pills to make you look strong. Therefore, they have side effects, that will damage your health. After your friend taking this kind of pill for some time, his hair might fell out or he might have health problems, some of which may even affect her liver or heart. Some athlete, whose achievements were great, died very young because they take this kind of pill. I don't think your friend should take the risk .

    Tell your friend not take the pills because he may have health problems in the future, when it is too late.

                                                                                                                                                                                                      Jeff

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    Today we visited a farm. Early in the morning we will set off together from the school gate. The farm workers gave we a warm welcome. Then the head of the farm showed us up. What glad we were to see the crops and vegetables growing good. At noon we had a picnic lunch in the sunshine. After short rest, we had great fun sing and dancing, telling jokes and stories. Two of us even play a game of chess. Therefore, the time passed quickly and we had to say goodbye to the worker.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear Editor,

    I'm a middle school student. I am writing to tell you something around us.

    Nowadays, as the development of China's urbanization, thousands of people move into cities, leave their children at home. However, many of these left-behind children have problems, which always feel lonely or stressed out and are more likely make mistakes. They even behave illegal due to lack of their parents' love and care.

    How can we solve a problem? In my eyes, our government should balance the economic develop in different area. Besides, we can organize “hand-in-hand” activities to call on more people to help them. It's very important for us to pay more attention to these children if you want to build in a harmonious society.

    Best wishes to you!

Yours,

Wang Qiang

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear Ann,

    I am so surprising to know from you're letter that you re upset so your parents don't allow you to surf the Internet. Here are some suggestions on how to solve your problem.

    First, you should communicate with your parents, letting me know that surfing the Internet do not mean wasting time. On the contrary, it does good for your study. Second, I suggested that you should make a timetable to control your time spend in surfing the Internet. Besides, explain to your parents that the Internet also has good effect on study.

    As we all know it, parents love us very much. I believe you can solve your problem and make greatly progress in your study.

Li Hua