删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意： 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。 2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不记分。

    My dream school starts at 8:30 a.m. and ends at 3:30 p.m. They are three lessons in the morning and two in the afternoon. We didn't need to do so much homework. Therefore, we have more time with after-school activities. For example, we can do reading for one and a half hour and play sports for one hour every day.

    My dream school look like a big garden. There are all kinds of the flowers and trees around the classroom buildings. We can lie on the grass for a rest, or sat by the lake listening music. The teachers here are kind and helpfully. They are not only our teachers but also our friends.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。

2．只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

    I was lucky enough to study abroad as an exchange student, but this allowed me to improve my language skills and found out more about the local culture. It was my active participation which helped me make the friends in a foreign country. Instead staying in my room, I got out of the house so as not to be homesick. I'll never forget the times when I first went camping with my friends. I also tried something entire new such as a dance class and a walking club. In addition, I tried to make my voice hearing as much as I could. As a result, everyone wanted to know something about myself. Consequently, I made much good friends.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear Jack,

    I'm sorry to hear that you feel lonely in the new school, because you find hard to make friends. Now, I'd like to offer you any advice.

    Firstly, it's normal for you to feel lonely because you were living in a new environment. Secondly, you should greet your classmates when met them on campus. Thirdly, it will be a good idea if you take an actively part in class activities, what can help them learn more about you. I believe you will be able to make new friends soon unless you're friendly to the others.

    I hope the suggestion above will be helpful to you and everything will be fine with you for the future.

Yours

Li Hua

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    Charles, an excellent teacher of our school, prefers to fish rather than to do anything else in his free time. One Sunday morning I made up my minds to go fishing with him at the SanQing Lake. We took our fishing poles and go straight to the lake. As soon as we arrived, we dropped the lines into the water. Before waiting for about half an hour, I was beginning to get impatiently. I wanted to give up, and he told me to wait a little longer. Finally, there were a sudden pull at the pole and fish was caught. Within the next few minute, Charles also caught a fish. Felt hungry, I built a fire by the lake and barbecued the fish. It was delicious.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其正下方写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线划掉。

修改：在错的词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    I always feel busy on my weekday. Apart from my regularly school hours, I still can use some time to do things I like. I spent most of my time doing homework. I have about one hour to do sports or take walk every day. Usually after meals, I surf the Internet or listen to music to relax ourselves. Sometimes I spend too many time watching Korean TV plays or playing computer games, that has wasted a lot of my time. Because I'm still young, so I should make better use in my time to gain more knowledge and skills. I believe I'll not feel regretful when I review that I have done in the future.