增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    After shopping,Mother and I went to a restaurant for lunch.I notice Mother looking at a nearby table occupy by an elderly woman and young couple.They ate silently,and it was clearly that things were not going well.As we left, Mother stopped on their table.“Excuse me,”she said,put her arm around the unhappy old woman.“You remind me so many of my mother.May I hug（拥抱）you?”The woman smiled happily as she accepted to it.After we left,I said, “That was very nice of you,Mother.So I didn't think she looked like Grandma.”“Neither did me,”said Mother cheerfully.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    Good morning, everyone!

    Nowadays, topics concerned with health are always drawing our attention. As is knew to all, health is the most important thing in the world. But how can we keep health? My views are as follow.

    Firstly, eat in a proper way. It's good for us to eat which are rich in vitamins and minerals every day, that was, some fresh vegetables and fruit. And breakfast is necessary, that gives us energy for the morning. Secondly, exercise regularly. Exercise can benefit physically and mentally. Thirdly, get enough sleep. Stay up late is bad for our health. Go to bed early and we will feel refreshed in next morning.

    Last and not least, enjoy the time with our friends and family.

    That's all.Thank you!

删除：把多余的词用(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

    On a storm night, I was alone at home. After finishing my homework, I was about to go to bed. All of sudden, the light went out. Meanwhile, there was a flash of lightning following by thunderstorms. I was so scared that I ran to my bed but hid myself under the blanket. To make matters bad, my parents went to hospital to accompany with my sick grandfather. I felt too frightened because my mind was full of scary thought. After some time passed, I fall asleep at last. At breakfast I told my parents that I had seen last night. My parents were also frightened and they promised that they would ever leave me at home alone.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）,并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均限一词;

2．只允许修改10处,多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    I will share one experience with you. With the College Entrance Examination draw near, I was filled with great anxiety. However, I couldn't be absorbed in study, resulting my failing in the examination. I got very discouraging. Just then, my teacher, Miss Zhang, approach me and said, "In life we all have moment when we can't achieve what we want it. It is natural. Don't allow those moments to weak you, but turn them into motivation to inspire you." Her words were a reminder which provided myself with constant encouragement to smile at life. Consequently, I gained what I deserved.

    So it is an optimistic attitude which matters most of all. It gives you the confidence to deal with difficulties and to achieve what you want in your life.

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）,并在该词下面写出该加的词。

修改：在错的词下划一横线,在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及修改均仅限一词。

2．只允许修改10处,多者（从11处起）不计分。

    Today I was going home by bike where a little dog ran to me. I stopped in time avoid hitting the dog. Luckily, it was not injuring, but lay on the ground. I came nearer and touched its side gently. It jumped to its foot quickly and stared at me in a friendly way. Seeing nothing seriously, I was about to leave, but the dog stops me by biting my trousers. So I wanted to adopt to the dog but it was unfair for its master. Just then, the woman came, saying that the dog was his and that I could take it away. Thus I got a lovely pet and I was very grateful for this kind woman.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词；

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉；

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    The United Kingdom consists with England, Wales, Scotland and Northern Ireland. England is the largest and for the convenience it is divided roughly into three zones. London is the center of national government, with its fine museums, art collections or the oldest port.

    Why did only Northern Ireland join England? In the early twentieth century the English government tried to form the United Kingdom by get Ireland connected without conflict.

    Therefore, the southern part of Ireland was unwilling and break away to form its own government. To its credit, the countries do work together in the currency, international relations and so on, but they still have very different institution.

    It's a pity in England the industrial cities do not attract visitors. People can go to older but smaller towns build by the Romans for historically architecture and to the countryside for great scenery as well.