该行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。

该行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。

该行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。

注意：原行没有错的不要改。

    After read your advertisement, I want to offer yourself for the position. I'm twenty years old, male, 1.78 meters tall, strong and health. And I am going to graduate from Nanjing University this year. I had learned English for ten years. My speaking English is very good and I can write good article. I have won several prizes in English contests. I have been made a great number of  inventions, most of them have been put into practice. But I can use the computer skillfully. If I can get the job, I'll do all I can do it well．

Thank you for your kindness.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1).每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2).只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    Although it was autumn,but the snow was already beginning to fall in Tibet.Our legs were very heavy and cold that they feel like blocks of ice.Have you ever seen snowmen rode bicycles? That's how we looked like!

    Along the way children dressing in long wool coats stopped to look at them.However,the lakes shone like glass in the set sun and looked wonderfully.Wang Wei rode in front of me as usual.She very reliable and I knew I didn't need to encourage her.

Dear Mr. White,

    I am writing tell you a piece of good news. Last week our school hold a Spoken English Competition. I stood out in the competition and won a first place. In my view, it is your kind help which has helped me gain the achievement. During your spare time, you often spent such much time helping me with your spoken English that I made rapid progress. In the competition, I followed your advices on how to behave, which led to my success. I'm grateful to you for your help and decide that I will make up more efforts and try to make great progress in the future.

    I'm looking forward to hear from you soon.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

    It's common high school students to skip breakfast，leading to great damage to their health. When asking why they skip breakfast，some students say they think of breakfast as the least important meal of the day，and think it unnecessarily. Beside，some say they have too little time in the morning to have it. And others，mostly girl，say they wanted to lose weight.

    We suggest that every student has breakfast properly every day，since breakfast can provide the necessary energy that one needs it every day. In addition，have breakfast can help you to concentrate in class and study more efficient.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（˄），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下面画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    I'd like introduce our newly-built website where you can improve your English. The purpose of set up such a website is to make learning English enjoyably.

    On this website there is varieties of English materials available, such as English test papers, articles about foreign cultures and so on. Beside, you can enjoy chatting in English here with other English learners to improve your oral and writing English. What's more, the website provided a nice platform for you to share English learning methods and exchange for English learning experience.

    Last of all, welcome to surf our website! I would appreciate it that you could give us some advices on how to improve our website.

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2．只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Ladies and gentlemen,

    It's my honor to give a speech here. After-school activities play a important part in our school life. Proper activities help enrich our lives, broaden our horizons or develop our personalities. 

    Mine own experience can serve as a case in point. When I was in Senior One, I become a member of our drama club, that I used to visit on weekends. Since my participation in various activities organizing by the club, I achieved a lot. 

    These activities bring me a lot of funs, provide me with good opportunities to develop new friendships and open a window through which I have a brand-new outlook. With so much advantages shown above, why not to join us at once?