增加： 在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除： 把多余的词用斜线( \ )划掉。

修改： 在错词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意： 1每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Dear Jack,

    Welcome to my school! Upon your arrival, there will be a party for youorganizing by my classmates. You may attend to English classes to feel adifferently learning style. After that, you can go to your host family that youcan experience the Chinese way of life. You can have meals together chatting about whatever interest you.

The host family will also show you off some famous scenic spots. You can see people selling kites everywhere because ourcity was home to kites．There are varieties of kites to choose. So isn't that a good idea to buy some for your friends? Write to me unless you have any questions about the schedule．

Yours,

Li Hua

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增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线（—），并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

June 12, Sunday

    Today is Sunday. I didn't get up early as usually. In the morning after I finished my homework, I do some washing. Then I telephoned one of my classmate and invited him to see a film.

    And unfortunately, when we got to the cinema at 3:00 pm we found all the tickets had sold out. Then we went to our school and played the football. Later, we were about to go home while we saw our English teacher came through the school gate. He told us we had made many progress in English this term. He also suggested that we read more and wrote more. We promised him that we would follow his advice.

错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(＾)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改的词。

注意： 1．每处错误及修改均仅限一词； 2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分

    Hi, Joe. I have read about your situation. This is common for everyone to have arguments or even quarrels with friends. So take it easy, and find the way out.

    You may follow my suggestions. First, try to find out that who did wrong and cause the arguments. If it is you, be brave enough to say sorry for your friend. And unless it is your friend, you shouldn't be too hard on him or her either. Instead, try to taking it easy and be kind. Second, give yourself and your friend some times to calm down, as it is not necessary to solve the arguments immediate.   

    Good luck, best wishes for you!

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    I was a sweet and loving girl during I was very young. Unfortunate, things changed. It all started when I was given smart phone in the eighth grade by a good friend. I became fond of watching movies, chat online and playing addictive games. Naturally, I couldn't make progresses in my study any more. What's worse, I spent fewer time in communicating with my parents. Thus, all of them were worried about what had been happened and turned to my head teacher for help. With their help, I realized what serious the things were and decided to change myself. Now I am grateful to them and became a good girl.