注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一；

2．只允许修改10处多者从第11处起不计分。

Kate was always unhappy about her figure, but she didn't know how to lose the weight. One day, she went to consulting a doctor. The doctor advised her to have a balancing diet and exercise more. So her parents were both busy earning their living and couldn't provide Kate a healthy diet. She often ate fast food who contained too much fat. She knew she ought to eat more vegetables and fruit that were good for her healthy. Luckily, two weeks late, with the help of the doctor, Kate become thinner. He was very happy and became more confidence about herself.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意： 1)、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2)、只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear Mr. Headmaster,

    I am writing to express my concern of the sports facilities on campus. I have noticed that our school has very limited resources in term of students' opportunities to do sports.

    It's known to all what sports are very important to young people. If they have an access to good sports facilities, young people can adopt a healthy lifestyle and become more confident. I suggest build a new playground, where should be designed for students with different interests. They should have a different section for each activity and available to students all year round. I believe so a sports area will meet our sporting needs.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    Breaking traffic rules and littering are common in these days, caused serious harm to life and the environment. Changing this situation required everyone's effort. As for me, I'll keep traffic law in mind all the way to school. If I ride the bicycle, I'll always keep to the right and never cross a road when the traffic light turns green. If l walk, I'll never forget to use thepedestrian crossing. However, I'll regard that as my duty to help keep our environment clean. Not only I keep from littering and spitting anywhere, I'll also help clean up the roadside litter whenever possibly.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词：

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    When someone ask me what my Chinese Dream is, I will tell him “To be a good doctor” with any hesitation（犹豫）. The reason why I want to be a doctor is because I want to save as many people's lives as I can. When I was young, I have a terrible car accident. Thank to the doctors, I survived and recovered. From them on, to be a good doctor has always been a inspiration to myself. I will study hardly to make sure that my dream will be come true in the future. Chinese Dream is made up of every ordinary person's dream. We should do our best realize our dreams.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    Stephen Hawking, a famous physicist, was born in Britain on January 8, 1942. As a child, he was enthusiastic about designing complicated toys. But unlucky, he, in his twenty, was studying in Oxford University while he was found seriously ill. Therefore,this didn't stop him living as meaningful and colorful life as others. He was so positive as to eventually defeated all the obstacles. He is also absorbed in his research into the universe. Publishing in 1988, his book A Brief History of Time became a best-seller, from where he put forward his famous theory on time. On March 14, 2018, Stephen Hawking, died in the age of 76 in Cambridge, UK.