增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（  ）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线（    ），并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词；

      2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

My soccer coach retired in last week. I wanted to do anything special for him at his retirement party.  {#blank#}1{#/blank#}  {#blank#}2{#/blank#}

My mum makes the better biscuits in the world, so I decide to ask her for help.  {#blank#}3{#/blank#}  {#blank#}4{#/blank#}

Mum taught me  some basic step of baking. I insisted on doing most of the baking myself. {#blank#}5{#/blank#}

I  thought the biscuits were really well. {#blank#}6{#/blank#}

My only mistake was that I dropped  some on the floor after I was packing them up.    {#blank#}7{#/blank#}
 At a party, my coach, with a biscuit in his mouth, asked surprisingly  who made them and joked,  {#blank#}8{#/blank#}

“I might have to retire again next year just get some more of these biscuits.”  {#blank#}9{#/blank#}
My favorite picture at the party is of my coach and me enjoy the biscuits with happy laughter! {#blank#}10{#/blank#}

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    Tom is one of my best friends at high school. We spent a lot of time together every day. We share a lot common. For example, we both work hardly and love sports. Although I am not so smart as her, we both do very well at school. Tom's favorite subjects is history and Chinese, and he also speaks excellent English. I am used to be bad at English. Thank to his help, I have made a great progress in it. Yesterday, our English teacher said she decided to hold an English speech contest next week. I think a good chance to improve my English. Both Tom and I are looking forward to show our potential in the speech contest!

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    We may have different opinion in organizing class activities. We may have various ways to dealing with such a situation. When I have a better idea, I would choose to stick to them. By doing so, I can not only share good ideas with others and also learn to express myself clear.

    Once we were discussing why to go for an outing. Most of my classmates wanted to go to a park while I had an idea of going to a nice place. I manage to persuade my classmates into accepting my idea. We did have a good time on that day. Good opinions are worth sticking because they can benefit us all.

增加：在 缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）,并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉.

修改：在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2．只允许修改 10 处,多者 （ 从第 11 处起 ） 不计分。

    The other day I was getting into my car when I saw the old man walking up the hill. He looked tiring and, as it was quite a rural area, I waited to check that he was OK. He was fine, so I asked her where he had been. He said he'd been taken a train and a bus ride just get out. He liked getting out once a day. He clear wanted to talk and we spent the next thirty minutes talk about his life. It cost me nothing other than thirty minute of my time. I learnt so much and he enjoy the encounter and left smiling.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词；

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉；

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    Challenges of life are of great importance in our grow. They remind me my days in senior high school which I joined in the military training. It was the first time I have lived away from my home, so I found it difficult to fit in. And the training officer was strict in me. I once thought I couldn't stick to the end. But anyway, I was succeeded. The efforts made it much easy for me to get used to life, but the difficulties I came across have now become a precious memory in my life. In short, learning to regard the challenges of life as a stepping stone to future success and make a best of them.