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删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
 Hi Chris

    I think going to a gym is a good way to keep health and strong. If your friend wants to be stronger, and he should try to go there more often.

    Yes, there have some pills to make you look strong. Therefore, they have side effects, that will damage your health. After your friend taking this kind of pill for some time, his hair might fell out or he might have health problems, some of which may even affect her liver or heart. Some athlete, whose achievements were great, died very young because they take this kind of pill. I don't think your friend should take the risk .

    Tell your friend not take the pills because he may have health problems in the future, when it is too late.

                                                                                                                                                                                                      Jeff

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    As we all know, we can meet with various challenges in our life. Faced with challenges, how should we do?

    Last month, our class climbed Mount Tai, that is more than 1,500 meters above sea level. Lacking exercise, I thought that this activity was great challenge for me. I felt very exhausted halfway that I wanted to give up. See this, my classmates and even some strangers encourage me. By the end, I managed to reach on the top of the mountain.

    Therefore, don't give up in face of challenges. If you are determined enough, it's certainly that you can overcome it.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

    Of all the festival in China, the Spring Festival is the most valued. The date for its celebration are not fixed, changing between late January and early February. To greet it, people were really busy. Before its coming, they often clean and decorate his houses. On the Eve of the Spring Festival, the families often get together, have a big dinner. On this grand occasion, dumplings are especially popular in north. The younger generations often visit to their elders in person, giving them special-made gifts. And adults usually give away a red envelope containing some money to children, that is believed to bring good lucky.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：①每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

②只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    My mom and dad are great cooks, but I always enjoy staying at home and having delicious food. I remembered when I was about six, all the kids in my neighborhood wanted hamburgers and chips, but some didn't have money to buy it. So my father tried to make some on the weekend and asked them eat at my home for the free. The kids were very happier. It helped me make lots of friend. Now I often cooking for my parents, and they like my dishes, either. It's really relaxing to sit around a table for my parents, eating and talking together.