增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在下面写出修改后的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及修改均仅限一词。

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear Sally,

    Now I'd like to tell you something about my part-time job this summer vacation, of which I worked like a guide in a travel agency.The work was interesting but tired. I think it was helpful to work this holiday. It was the first time that I have earned money on my own.I've come to understand how hard my parents work to support for the family. I used to keep on ask them for money, but now I'll never waste money and learn to share worry with my parent. I've learnt how to get along well with others.

    What's worse, I've gained some working and social experience and I have learnt something can' t be learnt from textbooks. All these will be good for my future. In a word, I had the wonderful and valuable summer vacation.

Yours,

Li Bing

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：①每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

②只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear Mr. Yang,

    I am writing to let you know that I needed your help with my English writhing. Which is known to all, grammar plays a very vital part in the writing. But I feel that I have some problems of my grammar. I am afraid that I am not able to identify my specifically errors. I would be grateful if you could point out and correct your mistakes. What is more, I used to the Chinese way of thinking, which stops me organize my writing in a proper way. I am wondering that you could also help me improve the structures of my writing.

    I am looking forward to making great progresses under your instruction. Thanks are extended to you in advance!

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

①No matter what hard the project is, I will finish it on time.

②They were extreme sad at the thought of their missing dog.

③I was about to lock the door while the telephone rang.

④Burying in his study, he didn't know that all the others had left.

⑤It's so nice weather that I'd like to take a walk.

⑥Mr. Smith insisted that the thief put into prison.

⑦The number of teenagers injured in the earthquake is frightened.

⑧Smoking can do damage for your health.

⑨I find the man is very difficult to get along.

⑩My father bought a new bike for me which price added up to more than 1000 Yuan.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．

删除：把多余的词用斜线 （﹨）划掉．

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．

注意：1)．每处错误及修改均仅限一词；

2)．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．

    One day，on her way to school，Li Lan found the small bag near the bus station．He opened it and found a lot of money as soon as a calling card inside．From the calling card，she discover the owner's address and his telephone number．She thought the owner must very worried．So she went to the public telephones and called the owner．Then she waited at the bus station．The owner came by taxi very soon，but Li Lan gave the bag to him．The owner is so grateful to her that he took out from 100yuan to reward Li Lan，but Li Lan polite refused it and went on to school．

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（八），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    Last weekend, I went to visit my English teacher, who was already in his fifty. He gives me a lot of help when I was a junior middle school student. Delighting to see me, he asked my senior middle school life. Then he advised me to make fully preparations for the coming entrance examination. It was so a pleasure to see him again that I didn't notice it was pretty later. I had to say goodbye to each other.

    He is not only a good teacher but my close friend. Wherever I will go, I will always treasure a time that I spent with my teacher.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词；

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉；

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    Smoking is widespread habit even among teenage students. The number of young smokers are increasing. It is estimated that over 10% of the senior high school students have tried smoking once or more and some of them even steal money from their parent to buy cigarettes, that is terrible.

    As it is known to all, smoking is harmful for health. And it's even more harmful to teenage students for it does greatly harm not only to their health but also to their mind.

    Teenage students are future builders of the country. They should spend their time learn what is useful but keep a healthy lifestyle as well. So it's high time that teenage smokers make up their minds to give up smoking.