增加：在缺词处加出加一个漏字(∧),并在其下面写上该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写上修改后的词。

注意： 1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Dear Ms Smith,

    I am secretary of the City Student Union (CSU). We were organizing an art exhibition for high school students in city. This will be held on the 9th of July in the Exhibition Hall of Beihai. More than 1000 paining will be on show, but high school students from all the eight districts will come to the event. As you are very popularly with us Chinese high school students, we'd like to invite for you to the exhibition. We would be grateful when you could join them that day. Looking forward to hear from you soon.

Yours,

Li Hua

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1).每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。

2).只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear David,

    I'm happy that you're interesting in our flea market and here is a brief of introduction of it.

    To raise students' aware of making the most of used things, the Students' Union held a flea market on campus recent. The event attracted a crowd from the whole school, who come here to sell, purchase or swap used goods with their schoolmate. On the market, you could find vary things, from second-hand textbooks, magazines to CDs, bikes or clothes at a lower price.

    In my opinion, the flea market not only provides a platform save resources but also helps students learn some practical skills, where may be useful for their future job hunting.

                                                                                                                                   Yours,

                                                                                                                                 Li Hua

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    I was often troubled by lack of confidences. So I applied for a job at an exhibition as reporter last term. The exhibition was held annual to display the latest products in the field of education. At that time，I was responsible for interview parents who bought the learning tools. While talking with him, I found it was not so hard as I think. One lady even praised me but asked her son to learn from me. I realized the experience was in great value and nothing was more excited than communicating with people.

    From this experience, I am fully aware that we should take real action if our personality that needs improving.

Dear Mr. White,

    I am writing tell you a piece of good news. Last week our school hold a Spoken English Competition. I stood out in the competition and won a first place. In my view, it is your kind help which has helped me gain the achievement. During your spare time, you often spent such much time helping me with your spoken English that I made rapid progress. In the competition, I followed your advices on how to behave, which led to my success. I'm grateful to you for your help and decide that I will make up more efforts and try to make great progress in the future.

    I'm looking forward to hear from you soon.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词；

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉；

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    Time spending in a bookshop can be most enjoyable. Here is a moved story about it. Once there was a medical student wanted to read a textbook which was far too expensive to buy it. The only copy he could find was in a bookshop, but he couldn't afford it. So that he could do was reading it in the shop. Every afternoon, he goes to the shop or read some of the book at a time. One day, however, he found the book missing from its usual place. So disappointed, he was about to leave when he noticed an owner of the shop signaling to him. To his surprise, the owner pointed to the book, which was good put away in a corner. And he added that he put it there for case anyone else attempted to buy it.

增加：在缺词加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：①每处错误及修改均仅限一词。

②只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    It was an early Saturday's morning in August. When we reached the kitchen, there was a big surprise for my brother—his favorite breakfast. Clear, it was a important day for him, as he would left home to go to college. After finish breakfast, my brother said to me, "It's time, brother." I think he was meaning his time leave the house. However he explained all of the important work that I would need to do after he was gone. He said that it was time for you to take on a bigger role in the family. At that point, I understood that my brother meant. He was teaching me about family, love or duty.