假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号( ^ ),并在其下面写出该加的同。
删除:把多余的词用斜线( \ )划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该同下面写出修改后的同。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
The Moments(朋友圈) section of WeChat has become the
popular part of the social networking platform. We can share everything about
their life on it with our friend. Many teenagers, however, chose to keep their
parents out their Moments. They argue that if their parents get involved, and
they will feel upset. As far as I am concerning, I feel happily when my parents
comment on my posts in my Moments. It shows their love and care for me. What's
more, shut them off may make the generation gap bigger and bigger, when
inviting them in would help us communicate better and feel closer to each other
than before.