增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^ )，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1）. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2）. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    I am a Canadian girl aging 17 and I' m mad about music. It is one of the most important thing in my life. I listen music whenever I can. I have a minidisk player, with it I can have access to music whether walking in the street or ride on the bike. At home, there is a CD player in my room, but music is on all the time. I like rock music better of all and my favorite band is Rolling stones. It so happened that there had a live concert of Rolling stones last Sunday. I went there and it was a great fun. I am also fond of classic music and I especial enjoy Beethoven when I'm doing my homework.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear Zhang Hua,

    It has been a long time before we last met.I have been moved to my new house recently.So,I'm glad to invite you come to stay with us for two weeks during the summer vacation.Sandy Beach,it is near my new house,is a wonderfully place.There,we can play volleyball,have delicious food,enjoying the warm sunshine,or even bury our bodies in the sand.However,we can go to a seaside for fishing.If you come,you don't want to leave.Please tell me the vacation activities we like.Then I can make good preparations.I'm looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Ping

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（/）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2．只允许修改10处，多着（从第11处起）不计分。

    Last week, my parents took me to the seaside. As soon as we reached the beach, I ran to the sea and jump in the water. The water rolled away from us. I still remember the sound of the water hit the beach and the foam (泡沫) of water as foam in soda or beer. I looked along the beach for shell to collect. I found a beautiful one, but sudden the owner of the shell appeared from inside. I was so surprising! My father told me to leave it since it was dangerous animal. When we went home, I decided I should return all the shells back to the beach to be part of the home of crabs.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）,并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    Yesterday, as I was queuing at a store, there was an old lady in the front of me in line. She seems very confused when the cashier asked her pay $ 38. The cashier told her that she couldn't buy the items because she doesn't have enough money. So I told the cashier I would pay for that she bought. When I got outside, the lady was standing here. While I was talking about her, her daughter appeared. She told me that her mother had Alzheimer's disease. Then she noticed that her mother had three bag of groceries and wondered how she managed to pay for them without enough money. I told her that I had paid for it. The daughter wanted to pay me back, so I refused.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：⒈每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

⒉只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    Chinese Dream is made up of ordinary people dreams. If someone asks me what my Chinese dream is, I will answer it without think twice: to be a good doctor. The reason why I want to be a doctor is because I want to save as more lives as I can. When I was young, I got serious injured in a terrible accident. Thanks to the doctors' efforts, I brought back to life. Since then, to be a good doctor had always been an encouragement to me. To make sure of that my dream can be realized, I have been studying hard to be admitted into the good medical college. Only in this way can I achieve my goals.

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