假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：①每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

         ②只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

      It is Mother's Day today.Though it's a western festival, it's popular in China now.

      Mom has a full-time job, so she has to do most of the houseworks. She is a great mother. Both Dad or I planned to do something on Mother's Day. We get up early in the morning. Dad cleaned the house, and then went on shopping. When he came back, I found a bunch of flowers in her hand. Iasked Mom to stay in the sitting room and I cooked in kitchen. The dishes what I cooked were Mom's favoritiest.   At dinner,we said to her,“Happy Mother's Day！”Mom was grateful and moving.

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增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不计分。

Dear John,

    Yesterday I had read a notice on the Internet. You wanted to look for a Chinese friend online who can actual help you learn the Chinese language, cultures or customs.

    I'm looking forward to be your friend on the Internet but I wonder whether or not you would like to accept me. If I become our friend on the Internet, I'll try my best to help you for Chinese in my spare time. At same time, I'll introduce some cultures and custom of China to you step by step.

    So if you are interesting in this, please let me know your QQ number and I really expect what we can make good friends soon.

Love,

Li Hua

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    I am interested at swimming very much. At the first, I went swimming just to keep health. Now my dream was to swim for my country in the Olympics. Though practicing in the pool is very bored, I still work very hard in order to realize my dream. Because my hard work, I have already come first in much important competitions. In the competitions, I've made lot of friends and we're very close. It's much easier to have friends which are swimmers because they also have to get up early to practice like you and they understand this kind of life.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词；

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉；

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    Smoking is widespread habit even among teenage students. The number of young smokers are increasing. It is estimated that over 10% of the senior high school students have tried smoking once or more and some of them even steal money from their parent to buy cigarettes, that is terrible.

    As it is known to all, smoking is harmful for health. And it's even more harmful to teenage students for it does greatly harm not only to their health but also to their mind.

    Teenage students are future builders of the country. They should spend their time learn what is useful but keep a healthy lifestyle as well. So it's high time that teenage smokers make up their minds to give up smoking.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词；

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉；

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    I am glad to know that Tang poetry appeals you so much. Now, I'm writing to satisfy your burnt curiosity. What's more, I'd like to offer you some advices on understanding it.

    Tang poetry, which represents the traditional Chinese culture, have a splendid history and enjoys a great reputation international. With the minimum of words, it gives a clear picture and conveys a certain emotion. However, Tang poems are easy to recite because they usually have a strong rhythm.

    As for learning strategies, I want to give you some suggestions. First of all, you'd better start with the works of some representative poets, among them Li Bai, Du Fu and Bai Juyi were the most outstanding ones. What's more, it is necessary to get some relevant background of knowledge about the poets. In addition, reciting one poem repeatedly is the best approach to get the hang of it.

    Hope you can adopt our suggestions.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词；

删除：把多余的用斜线（\）划掉；

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：⑴每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

⑵只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    Do you believe love is the most important? In the early twenty century, homeless people were often brought up in orphanages, in that they received little love. At one time, Dr. Skeels took twelve children from an art orphanage or had a young girl look them each day. He also studied another the twelve children who are left in the orphanage all day long. He followed these children until they grew up, and the results were shocked. The children staying all day in the orphanage were either dead or suffering from serious illnesses. However, the twelve children loved by the girl were all healthy and independently. The only differences between these children -- the love, made a great difference to us.