增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1).每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。

2).只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear David,

    I'm happy that you're interesting in our flea market and here is a brief of introduction of it.

    To raise students' aware of making the most of used things, the Students' Union held a flea market on campus recent. The event attracted a crowd from the whole school, who come here to sell, purchase or swap used goods with their schoolmate. On the market, you could find vary things, from second-hand textbooks, magazines to CDs, bikes or clothes at a lower price.

    In my opinion, the flea market not only provides a platform save resources but also helps students learn some practical skills, where may be useful for their future job hunting.

                                                                                                                                   Yours,

                                                                                                                                 Li Hua

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1).每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2).只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    John Snow was Queen Victoria's personal physician. He became inspiring when he thought about helping ordinary people exposed cholera, a deadly disease of its day. Many thousands of people died whenever there was a outbreak. John wanted to help solve the problem.

    He got interested in two theory explaining how cholera killed people. He doubted about the second theory where suggested that people absorb the disease with their meals. In 1854, when another outbreak hit London, he was determined to find why. In the help of the map he made, he got a valuably clue about the cause of the disease. He announced with certainty that the water was to be blame. “King Cholera” was final defeated.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1).每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2).只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    Last Saturday, our class had an excited basketball match with our neighbor Class 4. I had thought that our team was consisted of strong and able players, me including, while the opposite team was no match for us. However, when the match started, I was surprised to find that every member of the other team was fighting hardly, despite the fact they were far less capable than us. It came as no surprise that we become the winner in the match. And they won our respect for our performance in the game. The result of the match has taught me that, whatever the outcome is, which counts is that we have tried our best. Only in this way can we make rapid progresses in life.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1).每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。

2).只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    My friend Lucy gave me a ticket for an excited film which I want to see it very much. However, I will have to take an examination tomorrow. I believe that only when you do that you should do can you make progresses in life. In my opinion, it is waste of time going to see the film right now. That's why I decided to give up seeing the film with him and working hard at my lessons. Lucy felt this a great pity that I couldn't see the film with her. To make her happily, I said, “Why not going to see the film the day after tomorrow instead of today?”

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    There is too many people and too many pollution on the earth. If we moved to the moon one day，how would life be like there?

    In my opinion, life would be much more comfort on the moon than on the earth. There wouldn't be pollution or traffic jam. We could go wherever we like in one minute by the spaceship, which would be much fast than a train or an airplane. We would eat whatever you like without being concerned unhealthy ingredients. This is a place where I am always dreaming about.

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。 

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在该词下面写出该加的词。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，在该词下面写出改正后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及修改均仅限一词。

2．只允许修改5 处，多者（从6 处起）不计分。

Nowadays, it is more and more competitive to get into Qinghua University and Beijing University. Firstly, they have better condition and qualified teachers. Students studied there can better develop themselves. Secondly, graduates from them usually find better jobs. Thirdly, schools and parents saw them as their highest goals, which pushes the trend greatly. As students, we shouldn't take it too much seriously. You can also realize your dream even you are not admitted into the two universities.