增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不计分。

    On a cold winter night, it was snowing heavily, a bus with 45 passenger had an accident because of the wet road. And all of them were trapping in the bus and what was worse, the bus ran out gas and it was very cold in it. They could do nothing but to wait for help. A man who lived nearby saw that had happened. He and some villagers managed to open the door and helped all of them out of bus. He took them to his home but offered food and water and even some warm clothes to the children. They spent two days in their home and finally help come. All of them were thankful with his help.

增加：在缺词出加一个漏字符号（/\），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）花掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：⒈每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。

⒉只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不计分。

    Last Saturday, my family took a train trip to Guangzhou. The train was crowd and slow, but the scenery were just great! On the day we arrive, we visited several famous buildings. After that we had lunch in an Indian restaurant, which they didn't use plates! We served the food on fresh leaves, and we ate with our hands. In the afternoon, we went for walk in the gardens with a great many of trees and flowers I'd never seen. Then, we did some shoppings in the town centre. It wasn't that cheap, so there were a variety of nice things there. How a fantastic day!

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

I'm Cindy, a student for electronic engineering. To tell to you the truth, it wasn't my choice—it was my parents. I wanted to study psychology and they said I wouldn't get the good job. I wish I will not have accepted by the school to do engineering. I'm sitting in the library now and I ought to be doing some physics problem but instead I'm reading Erich Fromm's Escape from Freedom. I think my parents should read this as good, so they would understand us better.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear Sir or Madam

    I've learned from the newspaper dial my company is looking for a clerk. I'm very interesting in the job and I'd like to apply for at the position.

    First of all， allow me introduce myself. I have just graduated from senior high school and take the College Entrance Examination. I want to find an part - time job in the summer. I'm 18 years old and have a good knowledge of English, especially in terms at speaking and listening. In fact, I won the first prize in the English speech competition hold in our school last year. Besides, I'm quite easy - going and therefore very popular among my classmate.

    I sincere hope you can give me a chance. I'm looking forward to your early reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均限一词。

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分.

    It is clear shown that many middle school students have physical and mental problems. 68% of the students surveying have studying anxiety as well as poor eyesight too. And a larger percentage lacks sleep. 52% are short of physical exercise. 42% of the students won't obey our parents or teachers. Personally, I think we student should balance our physical exercise and studies. Without sound body, one can't achieve anything. However, too much attention has been paid only on studies. As a result, I suggest we are given less homework or more time for out-of-classroom activities. Only in this way can we live a happy and healthy life.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏子符号(∧)并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

    My senior high school life started as military training (军训). It was included two parts: the theory exam and the physical training, that lasted about two weeks. The latter was much hard than the former. Dressing in green uniforms and exposed to the sun, we had to follow the soldiers' daily routine and go through hard training. Each morning, we had to get up and fold quilts rapid. We must finish our meals in limited times, too. Then I think it unbearable. Besides, now looking back, I find it necessary. It is the military training teaches me how to bear hardship and lead a better life.