文中共有10处语言错误。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(﹨)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1）. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2）. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Dear Sally，

    Now I'd like to tell you something about my part-time job this summer vacation, of which I worked like a guide in a travel agency. The work was interesting but tired. I think it was helpful to work this holiday. It was the first time that I have earned money on my own. I've come to understand how hard my parents work to support for the family. I used to keep on ask them for money, but now I'll never waste money and learn to share worry to my parents. I've learnt how to get along well with others. What's worse, I've gained some working and social experience and I have learnt something can't be learnt from textbooks. All these will be good for my future. In the word, I had a wonderful and valuable summer vacation.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号∧，并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线\划掉。

修改：在错词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

People are not so honest that they once were. The temptation to steal is greater than ever before — especial in large shops. A detective recently watched a well-dressed woman who always went into a large store on Monday mornings. One Monday, there was fewer people in the shop than usual when the woman came in, but it was easier for the detective to watch her. The woman first bought for a few small articles. After a little time, she chose one of the most expensive dressed in the shop and hand it to an assistant who wrapped it up for him as quickly as possible. Then the woman simply took the parcel and walked out to the shop with paying. When she was arrested, the detective found that the shop assistant was her daughter. The girl 'gave' her mother the free dress once a week!

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在该词下面写出该加的词。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改仅限一词；

2）每句只允许修改1处，多者不计分；

3）改错格式不对不给分

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Dear Jim,

    I'm very glad to hear from you. In your letter, you said you suffer from depression because of the heavy load of study and didn't know what to get rid of it. Therefore, I am writing to offer you some suggestion.

    First of all, it is quite common of high school students to feel depressed sometimes. What really matters is you should face your problem and make up your mind to settle it. The most effectively way is to turn to your teachers for help. He will surely provide you with a useful and practical advice. Besides, take an active part in sports or you'll feel more energetic than before. Hang out with friends is also a good way to relax yourself.

    I hope my suggestions can be of some help to you.

Yours,

Li Hua

注意：①每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

②只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    I'm part in an android football team. On the football team I'm a striker, so I have to able to run very fast. My computer chips help me to move and thinks like a human. My first football competition is in Japan several years ago. In the way our programmer is like our coach. She programs us with all the possibly moves she has seen while she watching human games. I would really like to play against a human team, for I have been programmed to act just like themselves. After all, with the help of my electronic brain which never forget anything, use my intelligence is what I'm all about!

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^)，并在其下面写出该加的词；

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉；

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：⒈每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

⒉只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Last week, our yearly school sports meeting is held and the students of our class took an active part in it. On the first day, we watched the impressive opening ceremony performing by energetic teachers and students. Soon, the games formally began. Some of my classmate ran to the track to cheer for the athletes while others remained seated, watching them from a distance. I was exciting because they would compete in the 100-meter dash with my classmates cheering. Fortunately, I fell on the ground, missing the chance to win. What a pity! Although I failed, but I was still looking forward a better performance the next day. However, as the result of the rain, we had to put off the sports meeting, that made us disappointed.