Jenny is my pen friend.Yesterday was her(第十二)birthday.She came to China and she likes travelling in the natural world. On the first day,we got up very early and went to Tian'anmen Square.We stayed(在….之中) thousands of people and waited to see the（旗子）raising. On the following day, we(继续) to visit.We visited the Great Wall.It is one of the great (奇迹) in the world. When we got to the Great Wall ,it was very early in the morning. The sky was grey. We could see nothing and it was(寂静的). Half an hour later, the sun rose and  (照耀) on the Great Wall. Jenny was so excited that she began to run on the Great Wall.（几乎，差不多） thousands of men died when they built it. The Great Wall was made not only of stones, but millions of lives.We remained on the Great Wall for two hours. For her, the Great Wall is the place of interest not only to the Chinese people, but also to (任何人) all over the world. We really enjoyed(我们自己).

    It was an unforgettable trip.