注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    After travelling many times with my family members, I went alone to Italy for a long weekend. I traveled by a train and checked into my hotel before exploring the beautiful town. I went out for dinner alone, that meant I could watch people and took in the atmosphere. The next day I went to Lake Garda and took some lovely picture. I then read a book and sat under the sun for a few hours! I had a really amazed time. I think the best thing about traveling alone is you can be selfish and do exactly what you want to. You are in control of your day and fun, but my advice is to take the opportunity to travelling alone. As long as you stay safely, you will have a wonderful time!

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    I'm still a high school student, and on my way to begin my college days. Every day, devote to my study, I had learned much knowledge, which will definitely promise me a good performance in my college entrance exam. I hope that I can be admitting into my dream university, one with good equipment and learned professors, who can offer me guidance when I am in a trouble. Of course, there will be exams in college to check my study. I share the same idea with Mike that we should be active in college. I won't bury myself at books the whole day. Instead, I'll join much clubs that I can develop my social skills. I firmly believe that only when I fulfill my potential I make my college life more colorfully.

    Yesterday I stepped into a restaurant for lunch. As I was waiting my order to come, I noticed the old man in a wheelchair roll himself over to a table. No one and me seemed to notice him. I got up and go over to his table and asked if that I could get him something to drink. He smiled and said," Thank you. You are generously. I'd like any orange juice, please."When I was getting ready to leave, I walked by the old man's table to saying goodbye. He thanked me again and told me I had made his days, coming over and helping him out. I gave him a hug and told him he had made my day, either.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号( )，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1).每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2).只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    Although it was autumn,but the snow was already beginning to fall in Tibet.Our legs were very heavy and cold that they feel like blocks of ice.Have you ever seen snowmen rode bicycles? That's how we looked like!

    Along the way children dressing in long wool coats stopped to look at them.However,the lakes shone like glass in the set sun and looked wonderfully.Wang Wei rode in front of me as usual.She very reliable and I knew I didn't need to encourage her.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在符号下面写上该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。