假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。
文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词;
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉;
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:⒈每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
⒉只允许修改10处,(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Sir,
I've learned a teaching
assistant for foreign teachers is wanted in your school. I'm writing to apply
to the position.
First of all, I had graduated
from Anhui University one month ago. Having exposed to foreign teachers since a
young age, I can communicate with others in fluently English, What's more,
years of experiences of being monitor makes me a brilliant organizer, who will
help a lot to keep the class in order. The most important factor is that I love
kids, and I'm confident of my patience and care will undoubtedly, win his
trust.
All in all, I think my
enthusiasm and full sense of responsibility will make me a qualifying teaching
assistant. I'd appreciate you if you could take my application into
consideration.
Best wishes.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hun