①In addition, sometimes I am very clumsy and drop things or bump into furnitures.

②Pudong Development Zone is no longer that it used to be.

③The capital of Peru is Lima, that is in the north on the coast.

④But monitoring carefully, the snakes proved to be no trouble and all went according to plan.

⑤Would you like to introduce your new published book to us?

⑥They urged that the gym was kept open during the work time.

⑦I came up this book in an old bookstore several days ago.

⑧Mum can't have Peter stay up all night long.

⑨Just accept them for who they are, and give them encouragement to live as rich and full life as you do.

⑩Every time when I returned after an absence, I felt stupid because I was behind the others.

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。

注意：每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    How can we help children in poor areas complete his basic education? Since their lack of education mainly result from low family income, to collect money for them is of greatly importance. With enough money, they will finish their education very easily than before. Besides, good teachers are also needed improve the teaching in such areas. They can teach there but help train the local teachers. What's more, we can organize various event to increase these children's interest at learning. We can also guide them to realize that the importance of education to their future. After all, their willingness to learn is the key to continue their school education.

    For ages, sailors have said that it is a good luck to see dolphins swum alongside boats. Their presence meant that land is near, which will be vital informations if a boat and her crew are in danger. Some dolphins have even protected sailors which suffer shipwreck from sharks. There is no wonder that these unique and fascinating creatures have long known as our friends. Dolphins are thought to be intelligent animals because of its quick ability to learn. They seem to communicate with each other through a combination of whistles and clicks. While scientists don't know exact what they are talking about, it is thought that dolphins are telling each other that food is nearby, or warning each other for approaching dangerous.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏间词符号（∧），并在该词下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线（——），并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词；2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11）不计分。

    My father took me out camping for the first time when I as seven. He wanted teach me about animals, insects and trees. My uncles all come along with bows and arrows for hunting.

    Ore evening at sunset, we sat by the fire, have our barbecue. Just then a bird was flying over us. My uncles immediate jumped up and shot their arrows on the bird. Neither of the arrows hit the target, Suddenly the arrows was flying down at us from the sky — they were looked like rain! We ran to escape but fortunately no one was injured.

    That day I didn't learn much about animals, insects or trees, but I learnt a impressive lesson about gravity!

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词；

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉；

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    My father, who had been away on a business trip, would come back. I missed him too much that I couldn't wait to seeing him at once. My father's trains would arrive at 5:30. To my surprised, Father gave me the call at 5: 00. He told me not to meet him at the train station because the heavy rain. Therefore, I didn't listen to him. Though it was raining cats and dogs, but I went to the train station. The moment we caught sight of each other, all of us were very excited and I hug my father warmly and tightly.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出修改后的词；

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉；

修改：在错的词下面画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：⒈每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

⒉只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    My swimming experience is extreme interesting. There was a time when I swim like a rock. This went on till one day that I was fishing with a friend of mine at nearby pond. I slipped into one. If my friend had not come to my rescue, I would have been drowned. Ever since then, I had come to know the importance of learning to swim. I decided to learn to swim. I didn't attend to any training class but learned it all for myself. And now I have no difficulty swimming at all. Because the way I swim looks awkward (笨拙的), at least it can keep me floating. Thinking of this, I feel quite satisfying.