增加：在缺词处加一个漏子符号（∧）并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1  每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear Jack,

    How is everything going recently? I'm writing to tell you something more about my birthday. The other day we hold aparty to celebrate my 18th birthday. I received many presents from my friends and parents, including cards, books, CDs or so on. During the party we sang and danced, having good time. I thanked my friends for his help and company. At the meantime, I showed my sincere appreciation to my parents for bringing me up. Now I grow up, that means I should shoulder more responsibilities. I'll try my best to share more houseworks to reduce their burden. It's high time that I dosomething to repay them.

    How did you celebrate your 18th birthday? I'm looking forward to hear from you soon.

                                                                                                                                                                                 Yours Sincerely

                                                                                                                                                                                        Li Jin

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增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1).每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。

2).只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear Jack,

    Welcome to my school! Upon your arrival, there will be a party for you organizing by my classmates. You may attend to English classes to feel a differently learning style. After that, you can go to your host family that you can experience the Chinese way of life. you can have meals together chatting about anything that interest you.

    The host family will also show you off some famous scenic spots. You can see people selling kites everywhere because our city was home to kites. There are varieties of kites to choose. So isn't that a good idea to buy some for your friends Write to me unless you have any questions about the schedule.

                                                                                                                                                          Yours,

                                                                                                                                                           Li Hua

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

）只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    It was said that there is a poor countryman, who had nothing but an adult goose. One morning a man went to his goose's nest, and lucky he saw a yellow and glittering egg there. He took the eggs home. In his surprise, he found that it was an egg of pure gold. Every morning the same thing was happened, and he soon became rich by sell his eggs. The countryman became more and more greedy. He wanted get all the gold at once, so he killed the goose. Therefore, when he looked inside, he found nothing in their body.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    Stephen Hawking, a famous physicist, was born in Britain on January 8, 1942. As a child, he was enthusiastic about designing complicated toys. But unlucky, he, in his twenty, was studying in Oxford University while he was found seriously ill. Therefore,this didn't stop him living as meaningful and colorful life as others. He was so positive as to eventually defeated all the obstacles. He is also absorbed in his research into the universe. Publishing in 1988, his book A Brief History of Time became a best-seller, from where he put forward his famous theory on time. On March 14, 2018, Stephen Hawking, died in the age of 76 in Cambridge, UK.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意： 1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

    A friend of mine was giving English lesson to a class of foreign placing quite a number of everyday object on a table， he asked them to give her the ruler, the book and so on. The class went very smooth. The students seemed interested in the work until my friend turned on to an Italian student but said，“ Give me the keys. The Italian looked surprising and somewhat at a loss. Seeing this， My friend thinks that the Italian hadn't heard him clearly. However, he repeated, “Give me the keys.” The Italian then kissed him on all cheeks.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其正下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词正下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均限一词，请严格按照要求格式修改。

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

I use to be a person who hated exercising. And after I started playing baseball, I became attracting to the sport. Now, I spend most of my time improving my skills, for it is the hard process for me. I need to make more efforts than others. I enjoy the feeling of working with teammate, as well as the time we spend it together. I am a beginner in this sport. Sometimes people will look down to me, but it doesn't matter. It will only make them keep going. I believe only by practicing over and over again I catch up with other fantastic players one day. The challenge motivate me to work harder.