增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1).每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2).只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear Barbara,

    How are you? Today I've got a wonderful news to tell you. I have admitted to Berkely school in California. More than 3,000 students took exams for it, but only a few was chosen and I was one of them. Therefore, my parents are not happy about it. They are strong against me going there.They say it is too far away that they will not see me for a whole year and they are afraid that we will feel homesick.They can't imagine so young a girl like me live alone.They advise me to choose a university near my home instead.Then I would be able to continue living with them.How can I persuade them to accept the fact what I have grown up?

                                                                                                                                                                           Yours Faithfully,

                                                                                                                                                                               Jane Blair

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1).每处错误及其修改均仅限一词

2).只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    Last Sunday, I sat at my favorite table in a restaurant and wait for the food I had ordered to arrive . Suddenly I found that Lin Ling，one of my classmate worked like a waitress there . Honest speaking .it was great surprise for me to find her working there .As far as I know , she's from a richer family .What was it that made her to work there? I walked up to her and asked the reason. When asking , she said ,''I just want to earn some pocket money so that we can help some children in poor areas go back to school,' How a good girl! I should learn from her.

增加： 在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除： 把多余的词用斜线( \ )划掉。

修改： 在错词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意： 1.）每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Dear Jack,

    I'm very happy to know the news you are planning to visit to my city. I'm looking forward to your early arrive. There're a few well-known place of interest in my city. I'd like to show you around it when you came here. Time permits, we can watch some live operas. I know you're a fan of Chinese opera. As it is becoming cold day by day, I suggest you wear some warm clothes so you won't catch a cold. Remember to tell me exact the time of the flight. I'll meet you at the airport.

    Wish you the pleasant journey!

Yours sincerely,

Xiao Hong

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

    My dream school starts at 8: 30 a. m. and ends at 3:30 p. m. They are three lessons in the morning and two in the afternoon. We didn't need to do so many homework. Therefore, we have more time with afterschool activities. For example, we can do reading for one and a half hour and play sports for one hour every day.

    My dream school look like a big garden. There are all kinds of the flowers and trees around the classroom buildings. We can lie on the grass for a rest, or sat by the lake listening music. The teachers here are kind and helpfully. They are not only our teachers but also our friends.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：①每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；②只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    In order to leave some fun memories for all of us before graduation, our class made the special video to express our appreciation to our school. We carried out a heat discussion about what to design the video. We were gathered a lot of interesting ideas, but then began to make the video. We shoot some fun clips in our campus and interviewed some of your teachers. After that, we asked some computer experts help us edit the video. The video received a warm welcome to our classmates. Many great memories of our times at school flooded into our minds when we watched it.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：①每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

②只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    Recently, we've learned the news what our English teacher is retiring next month. Heard the news, we felt really down and couldn't help thought of our days together. In our eyes, she is not only a teacher, but also one of our closely friends. During the past three years, we had all grown into hard-working and active learners under her guidance. She has taught us a lot of English knowledges and how be a good citizen. Whenever we had problems, she was always the one we were turned to for advice and help.

    We wish her lucky and happiness in his life after retirement.