增加；在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改；在错的词下划一满线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Dear Sir，

    Thank you for invite me to the summer English course in your school. As for your choice between the two courses,   prefer the four-week course because of this will allow me more time to do sora traveling and make a few mw friends. Of all the subject I'm teaming at school, I like English best. I had been learning English for eleven years but my spoken English remains poorly, So I real hope to take this chance to improve it. If possible, I'd like to slay with a family for a couple of days in order that I can knew some customs  in England- what I'm particularly interested in,I believe I will have wonderful time this summer.

YouR truly,

Grace

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    California has the distinction of being the most multicultural state in the USA. The customs and languages of the immigrants live up in their new home. Scientists believe these settlers arrived in America by mean of a land bridge. Of the first Spanish to going to California, the majority was religious men. After the war, some returned home, and most remained in California to make life for themselves despite great hardship. In 1911 a great much immigrants from Denmark established a town of their own, which today still kept up their Danish culture. From 1882 to 1940 Angel Island was a famous immigration station that some Chinese people were applied for right to live in America.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均限一词;2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    I've been dancing since I am five. My parents, that were very strict with me, put me in many famous dance studio. I must go to dance almost every day, and only rested in Sundays. My parents wanted me learn every kind of dance so that when he owned my dance studio, I could teach other students. I loved dancing or sometimes they pushed me so hard that I hated it. Anyhow, I thanked them for pushing me and make me an excellent dancer. When I was 20 I opened my own dance studio with their help. Now I'm glad to be able to teach different people what to dance.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1).每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2).只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    About two years ago, I worked hard and entered a locally key school, which my parents were proud of it. From then up, I got up early and got to the school on time. After school, I went back home in time to help my parents do some housework while enjoy some light music. However, one day my mother persuading me to live at school to learn to be independent, preparing the future life. As I was unhappy, I understood my parents and follow their advice. Before living at school, I found it helped me save time and learn what to get on with others.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：

1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

    With the College Entrance Examination approaching, many students are so worried about it to fall asleep at night and even suffer from mentally illness.It's a fairly common phenomena among us students.Here is some effective methods for you to adopt.

    First of all, you should spend a plenty of time prepare for the test.Secondly, it is no need to feel nervous when you have some bad emotions.I think take a deep breath is a helpful way to reduce your stress.Last but not least, you ought to believe yourself and keep a good state of mind.

    Follow my tips, or you will overcome your exam anxiety.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：①每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；②只允许修改10处，多者（从第11起）不计分。

    Last Sunday our school organized a mountain-climbing activity, which purpose was to inspire us students to take more outdoor exercise. Hundreds of students take part in it. Having gathering at the Xiangshan Park at 8: 00, they set out for the top in high spirits. Along the way we enjoyed the beautiful scenery, chatting with each other happy. If someone fell behind, others would come and lend them hand, such as carrying their bags or giving them encouraged words. After about two and a half hour, we all reached the top, where we jumped and cheered with joy.

    The activity benefited from us a lot. Not only did we get some exercise, and also we promoted our friendship.