假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。作文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏子符号（∧）并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

      2）.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear Sir,

    Thank you for invite me to the summer English course in your school. As for your choice between the two courses, I prefer the four-week course because of this will allow me more time to do some traveling but make a few new friends. Of all the subject I'm learning at school, I like English better. I had been learning English for eleven years but my spoken English remains poorly. Therefore, I really hope to take this chance to improve it. If possible, I'd like to stay with a family for a couple of days in order that I can know some customs in England, what I'm particularly interested in. I believe I will have wonderful time this summer.

Yours truly,

Li Hua

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出改正后的词。

1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    Last Sunday morning, when I was having a walk in the park near my home, I came across a crew make a new film with one of my favourite actor. I didn't have my camera with me at that time, but I rushed back home to get. Unfortunately, by the time I got back, they have finished the scene and the actor couldn't be seen everywhere. I was really disappointing and about to leave when he walked out a building. He was right there in the front of me! I couldn't believe my luck—. Not only did I had my photo taken with him, but he signed his name on my shirt!

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：

1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

    With the College Entrance Examination approaching, many students are so worried about it to fall asleep at night and even suffer from mentally illness.It's a fairly common phenomena among us students.Here is some effective methods for you to adopt.

    First of all, you should spend a plenty of time prepare for the test.Secondly, it is no need to feel nervous when you have some bad emotions.I think take a deep breath is a helpful way to reduce your stress.Last but not least, you ought to believe yourself and keep a good state of mind.

    Follow my tips, or you will overcome your exam anxiety.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）, 并在下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处, 多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear Mary,

    I read your text message this morning. You suggested that we went to the concert this Saturday. I'm terrible sorry, because I have to see my parents at the airport. They are going to the Thailand for traveling but they will set out this Saturday. To be honesty, I'd like to go with you to the concert. There is said that the performance will last two week. How about go there next Saturday? Please let me know that it will be OK. I'm looking forward to receiving your call.

Yours truly,

Li Hua

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear Jack,

    I am writing to ask for your help. I am going to organizing a money-raising project for poor students. However, I am at a loss about what to start. I don't know what type of people was most likely to donate. Is it a good idea to visit to local business people? Besides, what is best way to let the public know your ideas? Last but not least, how can I guarantee that the money raising will be sent to the students who really needs it?

    Considering that you have much experience in organizing similarly projects, I am wondering if you could give me some suggestion. I am looking forward to your early reply.

Yours,

Li Hua