增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1).每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。

2).只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear Jack,

    Welcome to my school! Upon your arrival, there will be a party for you organizing by my classmates. You may attend to English classes to feel a differently learning style. After that, you can go to your host family that you can experience the Chinese way of life. you can have meals together chatting about anything that interest you.

    The host family will also show you off some famous scenic spots. You can see people selling kites everywhere because our city was home to kites. There are varieties of kites to choose. So isn't that a good idea to buy some for your friends Write to me unless you have any questions about the schedule.

                                                                                                                                                          Yours,

                                                                                                                                                           Li Hua

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    Hello, everybody! I'm honored to be here sharing my ideas on high school life to you. First, we should try our best to develop good qualities, such as being actively. Additionally, get along well with others can never be ignored, that can help us make good friends and live a happy life. Second, studying effectively really count. A good habit like reviewing is of great important to the challenging study. Third, we should never forget to join sports and outdoor activities. Being energetic, I have dealt with my life more confident. I hope what I have been shared can help you lead the better life in senior high school. Wish everything a great success. That's all. Thank you.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    Life is not easy for any of us. We will unavoidably suffered bitterness and sadness from failure. Thus, there is very important for us to have a good mood in our daily life. If you have a good mood, you will be happy with everything in the world. Most important, you will have an optimistic effect at the people around you. We all will live harmonious and happy life. It is good for our health as well.

    However, sometimes when you meet some difficulties, when you quarrel with others, but when you fail in doing nothing, you may have a bad mood. If so, you should get rid of it as soon as possibly. As we all know, every coin has two sides. So you should think more about its bright side. We are sure that everything will be better with time passed by.

Remember: only you can make himself happy.

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

    At 3:42 one of the greatest earthquake of the 20^th century shook Tangshan. It seemed as if the world was at the end. A huge crack that was eight kilometers long and thirty meters wider cut across houses, roads and canals .Steam bursts from holes in the ground. Hard hills of rock became rivers of dirt. In fifteen terrible seconds a large city lay in ruin. The suffering of the people was extremely. Two-thirds of them died and injured during the earthquake. The number of people killing or injured reached more than 400,000.After the earthquake, everywhere the survivors looked nearly everything was destroyed. Bricks covered the ground like red autumn leaves and sand was now filled the wells instead of water. People were shocking and they felt hopeless.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

    My cousin, Daniel, is the most success person I know, even though he has had many difficulties on his road to achieve success. His parents died in a accident when he was 17. Daniel needed to take care of his two younger brother, so he left school and found a job at a supermarket. At night, he helped them about homework and did all the housework. Daniel was also a very good worker. His boss was decided to help him go to college. It takes Daniel eight years, but finally he finished. Now Daniel plans attend a business management course and start his own business three years late. Daniel has a dream, but he is working hard to achieve it.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词；

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉；

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    Time spending in a bookshop can be most enjoyable. Here is a moved story about it. Once there was a medical student wanted to read a textbook which was far too expensive to buy it. The only copy he could find was in a bookshop, but he couldn't afford it. So that he could do was reading it in the shop. Every afternoon, he goes to the shop or read some of the book at a time. One day, however, he found the book missing from its usual place. So disappointed, he was about to leave when he noticed an owner of the shop signaling to him. To his surprise, the owner pointed to the book, which was good put away in a corner. And he added that he put it there for case anyone else attempted to buy it.