增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    Volunteering has meaningful effect on your community.But it can also have many benefit for you.

    To begin with,volunteering enable you to gain some valuable experience,that lays a solid foundation for your future life.In the meantime,by volunteering,you can make many friends,from whom you can obtain use knowledge that can't be learnt it at school.On addition,volunteering provides you with a good opportunity to give back to society, thus a harmonious society can be create.

    As far as I'm concerned,volunteering is a very good way to build self-confidence,too.When offered others help, we will have a sense of satisfaction and will be in good mood.However,volunteering is of great benefit not only to others but also to ourselves.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线（{#blank#}1{#/blank#}），并在该词下面写出修改的词。

注意： 1).每处错误及修改均仅限一词；

2)．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    My dream is to become a school teacher in the future. In fact, I had the dream of becoming a teacher since my childhood. In my opinion, without teachers, no society could make progresses. There is no doubt whether teachers play an important role in children growth. Not only do teachers pass on knowledge for children, but they also teach children how to behave themselves. Comparing with other jobs, teaching is hard and the pay is lower. And to me, what great fun it is to be with children! They make me to feel young forever because I'll study harder and try my best to realize my dream.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词；

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉；

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    Last year I went to the seaside to spend my summer holiday with my family. We stay there for about two weeks. The weather was much hot than that in my hometown, and I got used to it. Every morning, I got up early and went for a breakfast ahead of time. Then I went the beach and talked with John, that was my new friend and I came across her in my first morning there. John was warm-hearted and he seemed to be very familiarly with the seaside village. Soon we became very good friend. We have kept write to each other ever since then.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：⒈每处错误及其修改均仅限—词；

⒉只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    I was going home by bike in a cold afternoon when my bike broke down. As I was wondering how to do, an old man came over. He offered to help me and soon my bike repaired. I thanked him but asked how to reward him. She shook his head and then told me a story about how a boy had helped him two year before. His story moved me deep. I looked at the man, with my eyes filling with tears. I never thought he could keep such a little incident in the mind for years. Only then do I begin to believe that one good turn deserves another.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear Peter,

    Good news travels fast! I am glad to hear that you were admitted to Yale University. Please accept my sincere congratulation on your success.

    I knew how hard you have been working for these years but I am very proud of you for your success. I am sure that it was just your hard work which finally led your success today. Just as the old saying go, "No pains, no gains". I strong believe that you will make a greater progress in your future studies and work.

    At the end of your letter, I'd like to give my best wishes to you! And I am looking forward to see you before long.

Yours,

Lily

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    Learning English is of great valuable. English is widely used all over the world. It was often used in the international meetings. Most business letters are writing in English. With a help of English we can learn modern science and technology from developed country. We can also introduce our achievement and experience to other countries. Because its importance, English is a requiring subject in high schools and colleges. Now many people are working hardly at English. It's very important to learn English well. Unless we learn English well, we can not serve for our country better. So I suggest most Chinese learned it well.