增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意： 1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词; 2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Dear Tom，

    I'm glad to hear that you are very interesting in Guoxue．Let me to give you a simple introduction to it．

    Generally speaking，Guoxue refers to the excellent traditional Chinese culture，that includes philosophy，literature，history，music，painting and so on．Guoxue has been playing an increasing important part in China，especially for them students．Not only did it tell us how to study，but it also teaches us how to live．More and more Guoxue courses is given in schools of different levels all over China．

    If you want to get better understanding of Guoxue，you are welcome to China to learn it，feel it and enjoy it．I'm sure you'll benefit from living in two different culture．I'm looking forward to see you soon in China．

Yours，

Wang Kai

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号( )，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

I want to be a teacher when I listen to my teacher carefully. I think I can be a teacher when I grow up. I can help many students learn things well. I can play with my students, either. So we are well friends. I want to be a doctor when I see many doctors to save their patients. To be a doctor is really great. I think I can be a doctor when grown up. Then I can help many people out of danger. I will be by far the happy girl in the world. I want to be a reporter when I watched TV every evening. We can get lots of important informations from them. They make the world smaller and also make us happy. I would like to being a reporter when I grow up. And I can learn a lot about China and the other countries around world. I can meet many superstars so well. I have lots of dreams. I think my dreams can come true one day, because there's an old saying "where there is a will, there is a way."

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词:

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

    I'm a senior student and I'm now in the need of your help although I can't stand the great pressure.

    Every day I have to have lesson at school for nine hours and spend at least three to four hours doing my homework at home. Our teenagers are eager to play and enjoy ourselves, but we hardly have any time to do that we want. Beside, we don't even have enough sleepy. There seem to have three cases about the overload: the pressure of examinations, too many homework and high expectations from the parents. We often warned that if we don't do our best we won't have the chance to go to university. The pressure often makes me awake at night.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词；

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉；

修改：在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：

⒈每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

⒉只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

    One day, I happened to find a chatting room in my QQ there people were chatting with English. I try to chat with some of them. To my surprised, I found the oral English of some junior students were better than mine. I asked them for advices and they told me to practise more on QQ. But every day after that, I would spend one hour practise my oral English on QQ- Day by day I learned from many useful words and expressions. With time went by, I found that I could even communicate with some college students freely.