增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    I'm Li Hua , a student from FenDou Middle School, that has a history of 75 years. Lie in the west of ShanBa, it has seen great changes of this old town. I am proud to tell you that I studied hard since I came here. So far, under the help of my teachers and classmates I have learned lots of knowledges. Although I still have some trouble with maths at present, I won't lose my heart. I consider it not very difficulty to learn it well as long as I devote myself to learn it. I strong believe that I can be admitted by a key university.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear Tom,

    I'd like to tell you something that took the place in my school yesterday.In the afternoon we hold a ceremony for our coming 18-year-old birthday.At first we made an oath that like grown-ups we should have sense of duty for our society from now on.Then we showed our thanks to their parents who had gone through hardships to bring us down and teachers who have been educating us patiently.And our teachers also gave us cards expressed their good wishes to us.Finally,we put on wonderfully performances,singing or dancing.We learned a lot after the activity.

Yours,

Li Hua

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

    A moon cake is a Chinese bakery product traditional eaten during the Mid-Autumn Festival, when is one of the four most important Chinese festivals. The festival is for lunar appreciation and moon watching. Meanwhile moon cakes are regarded as the necessary part. Moon cakes are not only offered between friends or on family gatherings, and today it is customary for people present moon cakes to others as presents. This helps to fuel a demand in high-end moon cakes. Due to China's influence, moon cakes and the Mid-Autumn Festival is also enjoyed and celebrated in some Asian country beyond China. Most cakes have also been appeared in the Western world as a form of taste food.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（︿），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear Sir,

    I'm glad to recommend my student Li Ming to you. During middle school years, he did well in several subject, including math, physics and chemistry. Later, his efforts paid off when he admitted into Beijing University majoring in physics. After that, he went to abroad for further education. Because for his excellent work and performance, he gets a doctor's degree at Cambridge University. Today that attracts him most is our country's great succeed and he hopes to come back home to do something for our country. I will be most gratefully if you consider his recommendation and offer him a job in your company.

    Looking forward to receive your early reply.

Yours truly,

Wang Lin

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    As we all know, it's great pleasure to study in a beautiful environment that you can breathe in fresh air and enjoy birds singing. To create a more beautiful campus, every one of us should make it our duty to protect the environment. Here is my suggestions for you.

    To begin with, it is better for us to walk or ride a bicycle to school because cars produced carbon dioxide, which contributes to the global warming. Also, we should never forget to turn of the lights and the taps when we don't use them. Besides, we are expected it to take good care of the plants in our campus and get rid of the bad habit of throw rubbish everywhere. Last but not least, it is vital for us to recycle as many as possible.

    All in all, do keep in mind that our contribution are of value in keeping our campus more tidy and beauty.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：①每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

②只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    Recently, we've learned the news what our English teacher is retiring next month. Heard the news, we felt really down and couldn't help thought of our days together. In our eyes, she is not only a teacher, but also one of our closely friends. During the past three years, we had all grown into hard-working and active learners under her guidance. She has taught us a lot of English knowledges and how be a good citizen. Whenever we had problems, she was always the one we were turned to for advice and help.

    We wish her lucky and happiness in his life after retirement.