Dear Mr Smith,

    I was so please to hear from you and I'm writing to tell you something about my school. You are right, quite few changes have been taken place. On the one side of the road, there has a new classroom building. On the other side which a playground used to be now stand another new building, our library. In it there are all kind of books, newspapers or magazines. The playground is now in front of school. We've also plant a lot of trees in and around the school. I hope you come and see for yourself some days.

Best wishes!

Yours

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    Two years before, I traveled to Brazil and I rented for a car. Unfortunate, I had an accident and hit another car, and I needed to stay in a hospital for at least two week. I called my parents, so I did not tell them what had happened. I knew that they will be worried about myself because I was so farther away, and that my mother would not sleep if she knew. Therefore, I told them interested stories and how I was enjoying Brazil. As a result, nobody knew truth. I still think that it was the right thing to do.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

    We all make mistakes and they are unavoidable in life. But attitudes towards them may have a big difference. I still remember that my spoken English improved. In beginning, I always kept silent in the oral class to prevent myself from make mistakes. Before long my teacher knew about his situation. He encouraged me to speak out what I wanted to say regardless of mistakes. Whenever I have made mistakes and felt discouraged, my teacher and classmate would help me figure up how I could avoid them in the future. With time going by, I gradually made progress and now I can talk fluent in English. However, we just need to learn a lesson from the mistakes in order to improve our English.

文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在该词下面写出该加的词。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及修改均仅限一词。

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不计分。

    One Saturday morning, I was watching TV with my parents while a piece of news caught our attentions. The Guangming Park called on people adopt trees. That was exact what we had been thinking about. So on the next morning, we went to the park directly. A worker there gave us a detailed introduction or showed us to the pine woods. We choose a beautiful pine tree and the worker tied a adoption card to it. When my name was seen on the card, I was so proud and felt a sense of responsibility at the same time. To memorize the exciting moment, they took photos with our new family member—the pine tree. In one of the photos, we all smiled in the bottom of our hearts.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词；

删除：把多余的词用( \ )划掉；

修改：在错的词下面画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：⒈没出错误及其修改均仅限一次；

⒉只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    It is Sunday. Mrs. Read got up early in the Morning. She had some housework to do it. After breakfast she has a look at the watch and found it had stopped work. She bought it ten years ago, so she wanted buy a new one. Her daughter Sue was only four. Her husband was busy with his works and nobody looked for Sue. The woman could not let her to stay at home. So she took Sue to the shop in the town with she. It was a good day, Mrs. Read and her daughter went to the three floor in order to choose her favorite watch.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Dear peter,

    I'm more than happy to hearing from you and grateful for your advices. As we know, a great number of students has improved their studies by taking part in weekend classes. And I won't do so, because of I think it's not suitable for me. Weekend classes often focus on lots of exercises and teachers give lessons at a fast speed. It's not good for a student like me who doesn't have a good command of basically knowledge. What's more, it will cost a lot of money if I took part in weekend classes, that will increase the economic burden of my parents.

    As for improve my study, I will change my learning method and pay more attention to the understanding of basic knowledge. If necessary, I will ask my classmates and teachers help me.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua